Raegan Aubrey

@jonas @highscribeofaethorium @everyone else

NAHIM

Nahim cast glances of bloody murder at Zahlin throughout breakfast, of which he ate none. He itched to go over and start the fight, but he would have to wait, unitil they were out of castle walls, Fennin would take the blame.

Ellis sat across from him, glancing up every once in a while. Nahim…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I started laughing while writing this XD

@jonas

Interesting. I definitely get a better idea of the sword and Unspace from reading about it in your story. I like it. Kind of reminds me of Kingdom Tales and Halo mixed together. Have you ever heard of kingdom Tales?

@jonas

Well…that was intense.

Good job!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae

Fracture

He heard distant footsteps, but didn’t think much of them. He was too engrossed in his mourning ceremony to give them much thought.

That is, until someone nearly kicked him in the head.

“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” He screamed, his voice cracking horribly halfway through his scream. He jumped to his feet,…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I t…

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@jonas

 I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist.

Oh, that’s funny! I’ve read WAY more first person novels with multiple POV’s. i’ve read more of those than third person POV’s.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?

Also, is there anything I could improve on?

(Am I changing things too much?)

Chapter 1

The world is a dark…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Just fight him or something. The Sword chirped, That always seems to help.

Lol

Ottoline

She opened her eyes and sat up. Rays of light seeped in through the windows. She turned over in her bed. They were all exhausted.

“Do we have to go downstairs to eat breakfast? I mean have to?” Hedieh was saying from the bunk directly above Ottoline’s. “Because I don’t want to get murdered by a guy with anger issues.”

“I don’t want to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Great job! Yesterday I wrote 1,167.

@rae

lol

And then the nest one…

“Oh boy, we’re all gonna die.”

Wouldn’t it be funny if the first dragon they go to fight was like this?

🤣🤣🤣 “This isn’t going to be so hard after all”

@savannah_grace2009

*eagerly gets cozy, waiting for the fun to begin*

If someone ever looks at my browser history…
“WHY were you looking at shoulder fractures and gunshot wounds?!?!”

Describe in one word what writing is…
Insanity!

Interviewer asking me questions: Why did you go into writing?

Me: Not because it’s easy, I can tell you that!

Me talking to my favorite character about his backstory: …and then you get almost killed, but your two brothers, father and mother die and then later your entire family…

My character: You truly don’t understand the word “favoritism” do you?

Silvanis: Pssst! Ru, sit down and write about me!

Me: Oh, c’mon Silvanis, I just started daydreaming about when I get you almost killed.

Silvanis: Well, can’t you just take two minutes and write down almost killing me instead of just sitting there?

Me: Of course not, I’m to tired.

Silvanis: You gotta be kidding me!