-
Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Thank you for the advice, i shall edit (for the thousandth time.)
-
Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
I should tag some ppl:
@kyronthearcaninn @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @beth-torres @whalekeeper @esther-c @calyhuge @euodia-vision
Feel free to ignore.
⬆⬆⬆ -
Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Yes, I’ve been re-writing pieces.
-
Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c The promised Glace snippet…
If Only I Could Forget by R. A. E.
Peachy shores cannot keep in the salty water as it spills over its borders, dropping in streams down a fair cheek, and sliding under a girlish chin before falling and breaking on the ground. Shattering into tiny pieces just like my sister’s heart.“Glace…” A shaky voice s…[Read more]
-
Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @jonas I have approx twice as many horse pics as dragon pics!
-
That’s scary!
-
How many? I’m guessing somewhere between 250 and 250,000.
-
@highscribeofaetherium LOL! Unfortunately, our computer (with all my Mom’s stuff on there too) would not allow me to do that much, but if you include my tablet…probably around 250.
-
Still, that’s a lot!
-
What can i say? I’ve been Horse Crazy since birth.
-
Well, I have like, 2,000 pics of my cockatiel, so…
-
-
-
-
-
@rae
Um yeah, that is scary.
@highscribeofaetherium @jonas
NOBODY MENTION HORSE PICS…PLEASE!-
We’re protected by the anti-spam rule. As long as we avoid making horses relevant to the topic, we should be safe!
-
@jonas hehe yeah…
-
@highscribeofaetherium I’ve got thousands of various photos, but haven’t stopped to take many of my own horsey pics, been to busy taking care of the horses!
-
-
-
-
-
Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@grcr @anyone-else
the last part of chapter one
He ran until he finally came to a staggering stop and glanced behind him. The air over his home was black with smoke. The horrible memories flashed through his mind. His dead brothers and parents. Vorgan. The duel. The hopelessness. The rescue. All was too vivid.
His young features contorted.…
-
Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I had a dream last night that Marcel had wings because of a school teacher! I know, that’s weird. Apparently my mind is just gone wacko.
Chase Duke
Chase looked at the picture, then at Marcel.
“I don’t get it.”
-
Ruth replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
Oooh, I like it!!
He seems like a sad charrie tho 😢
Thanks! Yeah, Glace got banished for something he didn’t do. And he tries to convince himself he really did do it. I have a short snippet of him if you want.
-
Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh yeah, we also need to pick up a large quantity of butter (of all things) from a relative.
I used to run to get butter from my grandmother a lot, XD. That brings back memories!
-
Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Does that mean you or someone else have also been sick?
My past two weeks of life have been with a sick family. Mom had an allergic reaction that caused asthma, my brothers came down with a cold, and then I came down with it (I’m usually always the last one sick, something to do with my immune system. I also do take astragulus every month,…[Read more]
-
Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
White roses! White roses! How close you are to my heart!
-
Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
How was your vacation??
-
Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
plus I’ve been sick the last couple days, so I’ve been feeling mentally drained.
You too!! Hope you feel better. Btw, strong herbal licorice tea helps sore throats. Honey, lemon and ginger too.
-
Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Stagnant.
-
Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
This rp feels dead.
-
Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
Marcel shrugged and stared out the window, his feathers disappearing into his hood. Chase buried his face in his arms again.
There was a long silence.
“Why do you have wings?” Chase whispered softly.
-
Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
“You can go over if you want. I’ll probably…” He shrugged slightly. “Stay here?”
-
Ruth posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Helmut? That’s Mr. Bauman’s middle name? Right? That’s my grandfather’s first name, and my father’s and little brother’s middle name! Now you need a Johannes, a Lambert, an Ulrich, a Stockmann, an Eisele, a Juergan (might have spelled wrong), a Helga, and a few others and you’ve got most of my German families names!
-
Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
“Do you want to sit with them?” Chase met Marcel’s eyes.
“I… I… ” He pulled his hood over his eyes. “Do you know them?”
-
Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
Chase nodded in approval. The corner of his mouth twitched.
“I’ve never seen someone do that before.” Chase lapsed into silence, his eyes occasionally darting to the table with four other people.
- Load More

Aww, I love ittt! 😭
Wait, do you always write in present tense?
😀
No, I usually write in third past tense, but I’ve been playing with first person present. I think it adds a unique touch.
Ok, cool!
I believe Ally Carter writes her books in first person present. And she wrote it really well. At least for the one I read.