@trailblazer
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c @grcr @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @everyone!
=-=–=-=-Hugo=-=-=-=
Hugo Searched everywhere for Ottoline. Under the tables, around the food buffet, around all the dancers, and finally, finally, he saw her coming out of the basement, holding hands with Hedieh.
“Ottoline!” He cried out in relief, “where were…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah…I guess we did kinda get WAY off topic…(which I don’t mind, lol) but when we get back on track I’ll tag you, haha
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@trailblazer @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings
Aww guys you’re so sweet! Thanks! <3
I don’t have in person friends, what you see here on kp is about what I have aside from my sister, who I’m pretty close with. And yeah it’s super scary but guess what I just talked to somebody today 😝 and she wasn’t a family member, and I recognized her from my…
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yep! It was really fun, I have never been to one either and decided to give it a shot and was so glad I did! We learned about 6 different, simple dances and I tried to do the “Cotton-eye Joe” But couldn’t, 😀
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Hi!! I’m so sorry I haven’t been on in forever (Maybe its only been like 3 days, but still a long time 🙂 ) So… I have been crazy, crazy busy. Like, I even went to my first barn dance in my new town and there were almost 100 high schoolers🤯 Personally I love to hang out with people so I went without knowing anyone :D…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @esther-c
I will not allow this RP to die!!!!
haha
who wants to write the next RP?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Is this better?
“Last night, I had a dream…” Lilitu began. They stopped walking in a clearing. “I saw this girl…” he shook his head. “She was crying. She looked so sad, and hopeless…And it was so vivid. I could feel her pain, her suffering, and there was nothing I could do.” His voice was strained. Is he crying? Sef wonde…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Ofc! I love stories with that kind of friendship…makes me miss my best friend, lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @grcr @rae @mineralizedwritings
Ottoline
“Ottoline! Where are you?” Hugo’s voice echoed down the stairwell. His voice contained some sort of urgency. “Ottoline!” She heard his footsteps coming down the stairs. “There you are,” he sighed when he saw her and smiled his crooked smile that never failed to make…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
“I don’t want to lose you.” I was surprised to see tears welling in Etta’s eyes.
Aww, I love their friendship! This almost made me cry XD
I agree with Hybridlore, I don’t think the summary-type writing is a bad thing. It fits great with this story!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, it does end abruptly. I really don’t like this chapter, lol. I guess….more EDITING! SO MUCH FUN!!!! (not.)
Maybe something like that? I mean, Lilitu already described what happened, sort of, and I feel like it gets a little graphic in the actual flashback part. But it’s really up to you, if you feel l…
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Yayy! Looks good! I don’t mind the summary kind of telling, I think it works well for this story.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 (Ok, awesome!) @grcr @rae @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @acancello
Hedieh
As Hedieh twirled around the room with Amir, she couldn’t help but smile. This was so much fun. As the music slowly stopped, Hedieh sighed and let her hands fall to her sides. “You caught on pretty quickly.”
“That doesn’t mean it w…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!! 😊
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Brianne started the topic New Story Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c @hybridlore @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @thearcaneaxiom @acancello @kyronthearcanin @kydonandwillow @rae @trailblazer
Hello! I know I recently posted on my WIP, but here is the blurb for another story idea that I got from reading the first paragraph of one of my sisters’ stories. I haven’t written much, but it looks like it’ll turn out…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@acancello @trailblazer @grcr @rae @sarafini @mineralizedwritings
Ottoline
She never thought that she would enjoy dancing. Not in a million years. But here she was, fighting back a smile as Hugo held her in his arms. She felt like she was turning traitor on her inner being. But somehow, she didn’t care. She didn’t want this moment to end.
When…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @rae @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @everyone!
Heres just a really short one, with them dancing 🙂
=-=-=-=-=-= Hugo =-=-=-=-=–
He held her waist and shoulder and led her around the dance floor. He looked over across the room and saw Lane dancing with Kari, poor Lane was bright red.
A few new g…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@trailblazer @rae @grcr @savannah_grace2009
I love them!! Lane and Kari are so hilarious together, :rofl:
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