@trailblazer
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Thank you! It’s going to be all “true”, but I have to fictionalize some of it because no way am I going to remember EXACTLY what somebody said. But yeah, it’s going to be all about my summer!
Thanks guys!
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Sara replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 1 year ago
@acancello @trailblazer @anyone else
I wanna bring this back!!
Here’s my other “Lefse” scene I wrote recently:
As Sef walked with Lilitu, her side tingled.
He was so close to her.
Her heart beat wildly and her stomach turned inside out. She was happy, more than happy, because she was with Lilitu, and Lilitu made everything better. As far as…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@calyhuge @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @anyone I missed:
Since I didn’t have a description of Snake when I introduced him and I know some new people would probably appreciate it, here it is:
He is twenty feet tall standing on two feet, seven and a half…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
(It deleted when I tried to edit)
Oh wait, I can reuse the summary from last time.
Here you go:
Currently Active Characters
Heroes
Ottoline @savannah_grace2009 15 years old; pinkish hair; bow and arrow
Amir @esther-c fairly young; dark hair
Kari @trailblazer 16 years old; blond hair
Hugo @acancello 16 years old; tall for his age…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Oh wait, I can reuse the summary from last time.
Here you go:
Currently Active Characters
Heroes
Ottoline @savannah_grace2009 15 years old; pinkish hair; bow and arrow
Amir @esther-c fairly young; dark hair
Kari @trailblazer 16 years old; blond hair
Hugo @acancello 16 years old; tall for his age (5’7” I think)
Kaine @ min…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @acancello @trailblazer @esther-c @beth-torres @keilah-h (I think that’s everyone)
Does anyone want to add a(nother) villain? It wouldn’t be right now, but we have a serious shortage, especially since a lot of them might eventually defect.
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium
Heres a quick scene from Hugo! (If something dosent make scene, just ignore it 🙂 I think I’m caught up.. lol!)
Hugo
He quickened his pace as he searched for the source of the smoke. People were shouting and he was sure that they were fighting again, he had tried to stay o…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Nah, they’d be fine. They could just defect to Koshtin’s team lol.
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
No, I need someone who will take on the grief of the queen’s death.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Phew! This is getting intense! We should probably tag everyone, since this is kinda important.
@trailblazer @acancello @esther-c @keilah-h (is that everyone?)
If you want to.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
🤣😂🤣
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Lol I know! 😂
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Yeah XD
Well, we’ll get to see those reactions hopefully, when we post it for all of KP to enjoy.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@everyone @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @rae @acancello @trailblazer @beth-torres @esther-c @keilah-h
It’s looking like we’re almost ready to start their quest! So exciting!
What does everyone still want to do before they go? I would guess everyone wants a scene between the training partners, but other than that?
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @acancello @beth-torres @trailblazer @keilah-h
These are the names I have taken for the regions of Lillen,
Forest region– Silva
Cavern region– Antrum
Swamp region– Palus
Mountain region– Mons
Sky region– Caelum
Tundra region– Glacies
Ocean region– Oceanus
Desert region– Vastus
Volcano…
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Nooo!! Aww, poor Albert!! 😭😭
What happened with the dragon pics . . . ?
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Aww poor Albert!
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I think it would actually be super cool if you added Etta’s perspective! And I love the chapter!!! great job!
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Oh nooo, poor Libbie!! I can’t wait to see what happens with them next!
And yeah, that could be interesting! I think yeah, for simplicity’s sake and to keep it consistent, it might be better to stick with Libbie, but it could definitely work either way!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Actually, I think they were in the men’s room. I don’t know why Nora was in there. Also, you went insane too.
@rae @trailblazer @beth-torres
I think it makes sense to skip to morning, and then Carrie can arrive. Otherwise, she would arrive when everyone is in the bedrooms, and there wouldn’t be anyone around. How about w…[Read more]
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