Trailblazer

@ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-idk

I love them y’all😭🫶

So much had crumbled.

So many lives had been lost.

Leo sank against the wall, fists clenching and unclenching, every breath heavy, tears blurring his vision.

Dietrich…Fin…so many lives had been lost.

And Eze…

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@ellette-giselle haha I’m glad you like my commentary😂

@ellette-giselle You can tag me, sure! But I can’t make any promises on me reading all of the sections😅🫶

and that feeling definitely came across in the scene

@ellette-giselle I only read the section you shared today, I picked quite the section to read😭💀

Any thoughts on this section in particular?

Other than I think it shattered me??? 😭

it’s really good, I love the strength they all have for their faith and their determination to stand no matter the cost.

I think it’s sad enough and portrays…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I haven’t been keeping up with all of this, but MA’AM.

way to tear me into pieces on a random Friday morning😭😭

Bleh, I’m bored. Here is some Flazzy rambling. 🥱

What’s one place you’ve never been to, but have always wanted to visit?

“I actually travel a lot because my dad lives in another country, so I don’t really think about going anywhere a lot… but I guess… uh…”   *long pause*   “…oh, I want to go to the Ethri Islands. They’re, like, at the top of o…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good section! I like it.

It was a little unclear that the other three men were joining Leon and Julian until now, unless they were in the first scene and I’m completely blaming. I just don’t think we got to hear that they were back yet.

My guess is that since no one has seen the prince’s face, they will replace him with his c…

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

Next two chapters!

@trailblazer

Wonderful!

@theshadow

No worries! That makes sense.

@whalekeeper

Awww that baby Marcel doodle is sooo cute!! I LOVE it so much!! it looks good!!😍😍

@the_lost-journal @anyone-else

What are your thoughts on Jesus having siblings?

The Bible says that He does, and I am going to believe it.

If you could visit one of the holy sights from around the world, where would you go? And why?

I’m not sure! I think it would be really cool, but honestly I’m content to just read about them. I’m not big on…[Read more]

@theduckator

oops

I totally disappeared again lol

sorry hahaha

Omc that’s awesome! but sad because you won’t get as much free time :/

Making money is AWESOME lolll

@trailblazer

This was something my brother started:

Every night (except for Friday and most often Sunday and Saturday) during the beginning part of dinner, everyone takes 2 mintues to say something about their day. That could be anything from a work announcement, some encouragment they learned from the Bible, some animal/anything speical they…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yes. Knowing why we do things is so important!

Oooh! I forgot about the Sunday one! My family doesn’t have a “rule” about that one, but we all know Sunday is a day of rest and fellowship. I’ve actually been starting to not use computers on Sunday. Now, there are expections…last week my sister and I were creating some stickers on a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sounds good!

Oh, gotcha, thanks.

@ellette-giselle

I have hope that you won’t kill off all the characters… but am expecting at least one of the MCs to die. 😭😫

@ellette-giselle

Great first section! You did a good job of establishing the stakes and the characters’ situations. One thought I had (for you to consider) is possibly to remove the first journal entry and start off the book with Leon. It might be a stronger beginning… but it works great with the journal entry there too.

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@ellette-giselle

Oh, haha. XD. Yeah, I think we talked about it briefly right when you were first starting it.

Leon and Julian, from the last book. (Plus Albee and Ian, but I don’t think they’re coming back . . . unless they do. That would be cool.) I have a lot of other favorites, but they’re not in the Empire, so I doubt they’ll have much of a…[Read more]