Trailblazer

@keilah-h

Thanks! The idea just popped into my head yesterday!

@ellette-giselle

I just gave you access. However, I’m going to paste my whole story here. I will be pretty busy today cooking for Thanksgiving, so I won’t be able to give everyone access that quickly. So, I’ll post it here where it’s easy to read!

 
Life from Death

“Truly, truly, I say to you, the one who hears My word, and b…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That’s true, the rewrite was.

The one paragraph where you said something along the lines of, make the enemy rejoice when you’re out of the fight, seemed taken straight from that quote (C.S. Lewis?) I could see modern believers saying something like that, but I don’t think it would be a well-known phrase in this world. Maybe p…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yay!!! A happy part this time!! 🥲

@ellette-giselle

Okay! Here’s my story! I hope it fits under the prompt!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KRKHdtUymxACwVnKGswOJq6yXCThk_mA4qnmq0SLmYo/edit?tab=t.0

@stephie

@theshadow

@rae

@esther-c

@the_lost-journal

Okay, I’m just going to paste everyone’s animal here so everyone can read it if they haven’t. I tagged everyone who is participating, plus Esther.

I’m going to wait a few more days before starting, which will give time to those people who haven’t introduced their characters yet. And,…[Read more]

@theshadow

Yeah, that’s a really good way to put it!

@esther-c

Praying! 🙏😢

URGENT PRAYER REQUEST!
We just found out that the dad of two girls I know from school passed away unexpectedly yesterday. Right now we don’t know why but I can only imagine how this has turned his family’s life upside down. The girls are 14 and 10/11 and as far as I know it’s just them and their mom now (I don’t think they have any other sibling…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I have not. Thanks for reminding me about it, lol.

@ellette-giselle

Nope! You just told me I could only put a few of them in my signature, plus the 100 character limit, and that was when I was trying to convince you to save Eric. I can try to fit them all in, or I’ll just write “all of Ellette’s charries” if that’s what you prefer. 🤗😉

@ellette-giselle Looks good!

@grcr

I love that!! I love how you can see so much personality in each person! <33

@loopylin

So cuteee! Yesss, she needs to become a new character!!

@highscribeofaetherium

That looks soo good!!!

@ellette-giselle

Hey, he can’t hear me. 🤭

Okay, cool. Looking forward to the next section!

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. Yeah, no problem. He did faint, so there obviously was enough blood lost for that. You’re good! So, does this mean you’ll have to rewrite a lot of what you already have, or not much since you’re about to have Joseph leave?

@ellette-giselle

Overall, it was pretty good. Some of the dialogue towards the end felt a tiny bit clunky, though.

Very well,”” Eric sighed. “I shall bare the displays of emotion for tonight, but by tomorrow hugs will be limited to once a month.”

This is funny, but it sounds old-fashioned all of a sudden. Is Eric just teasing? Does he lapse i…[Read more]

@rae @raxforge I was kind of shipping you guys in my head already, but I didn’t want to say anything in case it was completely wrong. That’s cute though. 🥲💕

@ellette-giselle

1. It gives the reader more hope in a happy ending.

2. It’s more interesting because you play on the past events of the book to make readers think Asher and Eric will die, but then defy the stereotype, keeping them on their toes.

3. It saves Asher and Eric. 🤗

@ellette-giselle

YES! Much better. Thanks so so much!

@stephie

Oh! That’s a relief! I wasn’t sure how to make my characters interact with a 2D dog!!!