Trailblazer

@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @theducktator @liberty @ellette-giselle

*sits back and watches as the chaos and questions unfold*

And yes, Liberty, Hans hates Jews and is the main villain of my first novel (and other novels as well…he’s the main villain in several of my WW2 WIP ideas).

and yes, Elishavet, Hans’ entire life has been pretty…[Read more]

*begins making a new snowman*

I have just finished writing my three hundred words, and I have sixteen snowballs.

I will throw ten of them at the next person who snowballs me.

*looks around for a carrot for the snowman nose*

I don’t know how many snowballs I even have…but here’s 161 words:

She didn’t want to wake up.

Closing her eyes, turning her face into her pillow and pulling the blanket over her head, she desperately wanted this to be a dream, wanted to go back to sleep and pretend nothing was wrong.

But Aubrielle persisted, the worry and unease in her voice c…

[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @grcr

Okay thank you guys!!! <33

@ellette-giselle

That scene was so funny, lol.

*deep sigh as I head off to my lair to write*

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha.

Love the section! Mainly just a few typos. The orphans are so sweet, and Asher found a girl! 🥰 Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁

@savannah_grace2009

I agree with what Ellette said.
You should keep it! 🙃

@theshadow

Another question I have for y’all that’s more personal is if you’ve ever gone through a stage in your faith journey where you start questioning/doubting what you’ve been taught. Feel free to not answer this question though.

When I was about fourteen, (2ish years ago), out of nowhere —or what it seemed—I started having doubts about every…[Read more]

OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!

@esther-c

(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Okay….

I have come to a decision lol

I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.

Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

True.

Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.

@freed_and_redeemed

Wow. That is an amazing character background! I don’t know him (Hans), but I’m assuming he hates Jews? Because what you just wrote is an powerful reason why he does.

@theducktator

Oh I forgot I posted that lol

you’re fine!

@theshadow

oh my goodness

girl

that was literally amazing

I’m like speechless

@esther-c

I have no idea lol

ummmmmm where was the last time we RP’d???

*saves snowballs*

Throws two at @esther-c and @whaley

To everyone who threw snow at me:

I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….

I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!

I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

WHAT

GIRL

Your writing is so good!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!