@trailblazer
Active 3 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
The rules are that you write at least 500 words, and when the deadline day comes, you post your story here.
Micah 7:8 Do not rejoice over me, my enemy; when I fall, I will arise. When I sit in darkness, the Lord WILL be a light to me.
No idea what that means…
Perhaps, I can share why I love this verse so much:
This verse is Is…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
It looks great! This was a cool idea. I think you did a good job inserting a theme into such a tiny paragraph. Out of curiosity, how much do you have left in the word count?
Thanks!! Oh yes, that was so hard! I was going to keep it lighthearted and goofy, and then I was like, Hold on. And tried something a little different. 😛
Ummm… a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Wow, that was creepy. I guess I don’t like horror. But it was pretty well-written, I think. It was cool how you tied the ending into the beginning.
If you want feedback faster in the future, I would tag people, otherwise your post gets buried underneath all the other topics and we have to go scrolling for it. Although, if you e…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Lolol! I would ask @jonas since he’s the leader of the Adventure one. I don’t know who’s in charge of the others… I’m sure @whalekeeper would know.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
It looks great! This was a cool idea. I think you did a good job inserting a theme into such a tiny paragraph. Out of curiosity, how much do you have left in the word count?
Also, are you planning to add a name at the top?
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Great! I’m looking forward to it!
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Purple Eyed | My Current WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
No worries!! :))
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Esther replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Lol! Frfr 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
sounds great!! Tysm!!
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
Thanks ladies!! I will definitely consider that!
Thank you!! Yes, I love it too!
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah_h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet_pidyon @power @jonas
Please pardon me, everyone…I can’t believe I forgot about the deadline!!!!! So sorry about that…
Well, it looks like all things work together for good since Esthe…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h
The others:@power @calyhuge  @whalekeeper  @theducktator  @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal  @trailblazer  @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley  @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity  @savannah_grace2009  @koshka
Please pard…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh, I forgot to tag you:
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Liberty replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
A neat and sweet story! When I first read it, it seemed your writing was in a different time zone/tense than the italicized beginning. To me, it seemed like the narrative suddenly switched to more present tense…like the character was actually experiencing everything instead of writing it after it had already happened.
Maybe adding some past…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
Hey guys! So I’m entering a little contest that one of my favorite magazines is doing. Basically they wanted me to finish the letter (they gave me like the first two lines) in under 250 words and they’d publish a few of the submissions they’ll receive in the next issue.
I need y’all to tear into this piece! Give me whatever feedback comes to mind…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Unfortunately, I don’t think so. Ellette is out of town for the next two weeks, and I have family visiting this week (and I’ll be on vacation next week.) I would imagine that we’ll pick it back up on one of the following Saturdays, unless @savannah_grace2009 or someone else is interested in leading them while we’re gone. I don’t k…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh no, I’m sorry! I’ll be praying for y’all as you travel and try to get things worked out.
We’ll miss you! 😢
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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