Trailblazer

@jonas

It sounds like a super fun idea! I don’t know if I’ll participate this time, though, since I’m kind of in the middle of my WIP and already have some people critiquing it. Thanks for the invite! Oh, and like Ellette said, if you happen to need some outsiders to force help people get writing, I could probably do that! 😁

@jonas

I’d be willing to give it a shot. I need to start actually writing again so this could help.

@esther-c

Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.

You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.

Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.

What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]

@theducktator Yay!!

@whalekeeper

Totally understand where you’re coming from. I’ll be praying!

@the_lost-journal

Congratulations!!!

@keilah-h

Ewwww! Babies too? 🤮

@ellette-giselle

Nope. XD

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I did—I think I responded? Unless I didn’t send it?

It’s cool. I had no idea what it meant until I read the rest of it though. XD

@ellette-giselle

That’s so exciting!!!! Congratulations!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yay!! I was getting a little worried 😅

Have you graduated yet, by the way? (Congrats if you did!)

This section was good. I think you did a good job of showing the horror of the University executions without making it too descriptive *shudders*

Leon ran the other way, and Julian turned and scrambled down the street nearest to…

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@the_lsot-journal

LOLOL

hee hee..

My Leander is a boy.

…sometimes my boys just, uh, look kinda girlie…

@the_lost-journal

Pliz do!

Boom. I’m kinda lazy, so here’s the best I got rn.

hee hee they turned out so goodie… 🤭

@ellette-giselle

No new sections?

@the_lost-journal
Oh and Sara—savannah_grace2009—has a Leander too. Isn’t that something, lolz

@the_lost-journal

*GASP!* ARE YOU BEING HONEST!!!! YOU GAVE CASSIUS AND LEANDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but those names are so UNIQUE!!! I don’t believe you!!

You must believe me, because it is quite true!! Heh heh. I shall send you a picture of them if you want visual proof. 😈

And besides, my Leander and Cassius are COOOLEER!!!!!! He he he!!! Besides! M…

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@the_lost-journal

Except, there is a female way to spell Rapha, and it’s “Rafa” (I am not joking XD )

Oh wow. that’s crazy.

You could change it that way, if it makes you happy. It’s up to you.

HOW DARE YOU USE THOE NAMES D:< I will hunt you down and KILL YOU!!! *BUM BUM… BUMMMM!!* HE HE HE!!!!

Oh yeah? Heh heh… well… ima hunt you too down beca…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

If I were you, I would just keep the names how they are. It’s fantasy. The names you’re using aren’t exactly common names, so I don’t think it matters too much… or at least I don’t think anyones going to chase you down about your characters’ names.

I have characters with all sorts of unorthodox names that I have no real plans…[Read more]