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@vinagirl

Welcome, welcome!

(Now for my proper introduction XD)

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, fiction-writing, homeschooled, God-loving, teen girl!!

I write fantasy and dystopian, and I’ve dabbled a bit in historical and contemporary fiction.

My name is Raegan. I am the oldest of seven children and a lot of…

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@vinagirl

yeah it’s never boring around our house🤣

😄 I bet!

my favorite color is teal

oh!! that’s a pleasant color!

I have no idea how many characters I have. I’ve never counted 😂 I’d say somewhere around thirty to forty?

Oh awesome!!

First person (I walked) for sure.

Cool!!

Characters! I am SO BAD at world building! 🤣🤣

lol!

Forever and ever amen…

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whoops… I didn’t mean for mine to be so long…

@vinagirl

Greetings from Burne!

Hey there! I’m GRCR! I’m a fiction fantasy-ish writer, an avid artist, a journalist for my fictional newspaper, and a character lover that has over three hundred in my book cast (oh, and I love them so much that I wish they were real people, lol). I enjoy listening to music and imagining my characters singing the…[Read more]

I decided to try a wide board instead of a tall board…. so here that is…

The character is my beloved Brayden Gretchen (I know and I don’t care, so I’m using that girls name as a surname anyway). Brayden is one of Blaine Gretchen’s eight siblings. (I know you all don’t know who Blaine is yet… I think he’s the only MC in my story that I…[Read more]

@jonas

I think Freedom’s adding a few more charries to the castle.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, wow XD I didn’t even realize it had been so long since this was posted. Sorry, I don’t know why I didn’t see it before, I know you didn’t tag me but I check the recent topics fairly often. I totally get that, but I think in future editing it might make more sense to cut the opening chapters. But it’s totally up to you…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s a second book I don’t think it’s a big problem.

I agree, the ending is abrupt, but I’m not sure how to make it any less so. It just kinda m…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t have much to add, since I basically agree with Hybridlore and Jonas. Soo… yeah, other than the points mentioned, it looks good to me… 😄

@jonas @whalekeeper @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @rae

@savannah_grace2009

Great job on the outline! I know it’s hard XD I’ve tried to outline my stories before, but tbh I never really got a complete outline.

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s…[Read more]

Those two… 🤣

@freedomwriter76

Alrighty! Here it is! (:

Everton

Ev woke with a start. His vision blurred and unblurred until he could finally see clearly. His eyes glanced over the stone walls and the flickering sconces.

Oh… this place again… He had been here before. Wasn’t sure how it had happened, but here he was in this wild castle again.

He mutte…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Sure! Sounds good! I’ll get to writing their first RP later this afternoon, but feel free to do one before me. (:

@freedomwriter76

Aww 😢 Poor boi. He needs hugs. 🥺

@loopylin

Oh my word, I love that. 🤣

@freedomwriter76

Poor guy…. 🥺💛

I love the quote about trust…

@freedomwriter76

Thanks!! 😊

(ApPaReNtLy I’vE aLrEaDy SaId ThAt… So It DiDn’T sEnD… lol)