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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Great! I’m ready to get hit.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Oh, ok, lol! 😅
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
…Do we need more snowballing? I still have ten ready and available for flinging… 😈
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Sure thing! I haven’t been snowballed in a while though…it actually looks like there’s not much snowballing anymore!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Well. I just scrolled through like, ten pages of this to count my snowballs. I think there was eight. I will be writing them up and posting them later.
Sorry I haven’t responded to your KP fanfic sections. It’s about to get interesting, tag me when you finish the next one!
@theducktator Your signature isn’t from Of Fire and Ash, is it?…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
I agree! I also think it’s important for the children to see their parents doing those things, too, because they imitate what is modeled to them (especially young children).
Totally!
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Liberty replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 weeks ago
I’m so sorry! I forgot to reply to you, and now Christmas is OVER! Well, I can still reply now.
Good question lol. As of late. I’ve become very overly obsessive over whether something is right or wrong, and this isn’t the only subject I’ve been mulling over lately. I’m still not sure, because I don’t want to end up doing what’s wr…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Pardon me for taking so long to get back to you!
It’s called “Practicing the Presence of God” by Brother Lawrence. Have you heard of it?
Yes! In fact, I just bought it to read but haven’t really dived into it yet!Awesome! It’s an amazing book.
I love that! And it’s so true- I’ve seen cases where pastors and ministers and even mis…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
We made pho, banh mi sandwiches, and tteokbokki and stayed up until 11:00 having something of a karaoke party. I was up until close to 1:00 though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Oh no!!! That’s terrible!!! That makes me want to cry for you!
I know. I was so mad.
Hmm, I find it funny that you think the ending thing feels a little un-realistic. I wrote it after reading of five different situations in different countries where something like this happened to Believers who had been arrested. XD
I guess the B…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
THEOLOGY/MESSAGE
~ Any theological concerns for the story?
I don’t think so.
~ What would you say my world view was?
Christian? XD. (Again, I don’t really know what kind of answer you want here.)
~ What would you say was the message of the story?
God will give us strength when we are weak and help us have the courage to stand up for Him.
~Were…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
STORYLINE
~ Was the plot solid and engaging?
~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?
I feel like these two kind of go together. The pacing, I felt, was not very consistent. Sometimes we would be skipping over weeks or months, sometimes we would get slow, slice-of-life scenes, and sometimes we…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I’m flexible, so whenever everyone else is ready to read the next book is fine with me. And is it about Leon and Julian?
K, here’s the characters section.
CHARACTERS~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Joseph, because he’s the main. 🤪 But no, really, we got to see all his inner…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I WAS LITERALLY ON THE ILLUSTRATION QUESTION 😣
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I was so, so close to finishing your questions, and then a bee came over by me, and I picked up my laptop and ran away (lol.)
But then I accidentally hit the screen somehow and I CLOSED THE LINK!!!
Augggghhhh. I cannot believe that just happened. Now I have to write them all out AGAIN. So this might take a while.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
AHHH ELLETTE YOU SAVED THEM!!!
AND IT’S DONE!! CONGRATULATIONS!! (I know this is a later draft, but still xD)
Biggest thing I noticed, is that, in the end where Joseph and Amelia are talking, some of the things that they say, “I’m so glad that… etc.” seemed a little bit like info-dumping. It’s good for us to have all that in…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Sorry, didn’t get tagged! 😒
That does sound like fun! We always stay up till midnight too—last night we had a bunch of neighbor kids over, so we watched some YouTube videos and then played some games until midnight. I don’t think I’ve made any resolutions… but we’ll see, there’s still time.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Happy Almost New Year everyone!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Happy Almost New Year! What are you guys up to?
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hybridlore replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Aww, your relationship with your brother sounds so sweet.
Same—we played with our stuffed animals too. We had maybe thirty of them between us, and they all belonged to a “pack” with an alpha, and a beta, etc. (Me and my sister were Erin Hunter fans.) We acted out whole storylines—probably enough to fill a novel xD.
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