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Active 6 months, 1 week ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Yess! 😁 Gotcha. I remembered seeing him in it, but not much. (I still gotta finish that. Did you post the whole thing on there, even the ending?)
*putting all the pieces together lol* Yeah, I could tell 😢😢.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
OH!!! This is the Leon from the RP!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Yayyyy!!!! Julian!!! And more people!! 😆
It looks good! I liked the flashbacks into Joseph’s backstory. The only thing was I caught a sentence or two that didn’t flow well— “It was evening of the next day.” for example. Maybe you could change it to, “it was the next evening?” Idk. I’m sure it’s fine if you leave it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 10 months ago
@the-ducktator
I’ll be praying! 🙏
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle Oops, I didn’t see your post.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
It’s okay, no one is going to hate you. Ellette wasn’t being serious about really kicking you off KP, and like she said, it’s hard to tell online whether someone is joking or not. I understand that you have a lot going on, but I think you over reacted. If you are hurt by something that someone says, maybe try to clarify what…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Lolol. And yeah, I can see what Koshka is saying, but that wasn’t really what I was thinking while I read it. I thought the scene was great.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Heeheehee 😁
Thank you!
why are they all in that uniform? Is there a reason?
Yup, it’s their trainee uniform, since they are warriors in the same team. 🙃
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Ohh, I’m sorry. I didn’t know that was a rule. 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Oof, yeah, I get that. It is one of the hardest parts about stories, but also one of the things that really makes you love the characters!
I thought it was pretty realistic that the boys would be quick to fight with each other because they are worn out and worried. Sabina’s idea to help them make up was pretty smart. And she g…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Yep! lol. I read pretty fast sometimes, but it wasn’t that long of a section. Plus I saw pretty much as soon as you posted it. 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Aww, I love it!!! 🥰
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
No worries!
Here are some ideas: Lightning, Skyscraper, Ruffle, Talon, Clew, Buff, and Tobias.
Do you want a more animal-sounding name like Lightning or a names like Buff? His name would also reflect some of his character as well, so that’s something to keep in mind.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I mean, the topic is very broad. It could be as simple as showing the leaves of a tree withering and dying, or the spiritual death and resurrection of a new believer. It doesn’t necessarily mean you have to show someone dying–and even if you do, there’s a way to handle it in a way that doesn’t glorify…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Is this because the profile update links weren’t working?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I love it! They are so sweet!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Hello Magic Potato. What potato am I?
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