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@ellette-giselle

You’re right, you’re right, but that was a better comparison than the Cadwicks. Plus, Sabina and Turin became nicer xD

@whalekeeper

AHHH thank you!! That really means so much to me! 💜💜

I really want to make a comic, I just can’t figure out what to do it about. I have sooommething started a little… a superhero one-shot… I just… eh. 😅😁

@ellette-giselle

Lesson learned… I guess I have to add you every time. Unless you were using a different account?

@ellette-giselle

Yayy!!!

Hmm… they are reminding me of Sabina and Turin a little. More closed-off, not believers, smaller family who probably went through some grief. I’m excited to learn more about them. I feel like the father is already suspicious of them… meaning he might be really opposed when they bring up God… but Liesl will probabl…[Read more]

Here’s another picture I created…. pretty happy with it. 😁

Not really done, but blehhh.

Chapters 5 and 6 are out! Same link as last time…

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iTo1_yooHUC67Ve8ddKn2gCS0rK_fjpc0kh_NJu3Sig/edit

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @raxforge @theshadow @anyone-else

@ellette-giselle

Okay!

@theshadow

First, have to clear out all of the uh… wonderful writing before posting it.

XD

Lol, I was rewatching an episode from Martha Speaks (I don’t care if it’s for kids it’s one of the greatest shows ever), and this line really spoke to me.

Oh my goodness *brings back memories* We used to love that show.  But I don’t remember that line, sadly xD

@whalekeeper

I’ll be praying for you as well!

@stephie

That’s great!! 😊

@ellette-giselle

I know.

But the MOST utterly hilarious part is the goat woo!!!!!! When we first heard it, we were utterly shocked. And then we had to repeated that part again…and again…and again…and it is still belly-achingly funny!!!!!!🤣

@ellette-giselle

I’m choking with laughter.

@theshadow

Yeppp!!!

@ellette-giselle

Sometimes love is dunderheaded!”

*gagging at the reference*…

@the_lost-journal

I take German! I invented the quote myself! 😂

Neat! I wanted to learn German for a while…and still do.

@ellette-giselle

*randomly pops in*

Maybe having Leon point that out would help readers realize it more?

@elishavet-pidyon

I liked how you had Neveah try to combat the lie, and it’s obvious it’s for Sef’s sake, not her own. To make this sequence really work, maybe make Sef think her Mani is just trying to save herself – it’s not a lie about Sef, but it would make the former lie hit home. Make her really crumble since the last thing keeping the lie f…

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@elishavet-pidyon

wowww…that’s a lot to think about and really helpful!!! Thank you!

Here’s a little background on that scene…

yes, I know it is very sloppy and not perfect (I just wrote it literally today)

but here’s the cliffnotes:

• Sef is a slave of Iver, who is a Pythonos.
• Sef and Iver are currently in the throne room of the Master, leader of all Pythonos
• Iver has applied for a military position, and the Master is…

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@the_lost-journal

WHATTT
the chosen makes me wanna cry

it’s so good!!!! they portrayed it so well in my opinion hahaha

it’s my FAVORITE show of all time hahaha

@elishavet-pidyon

YES those are what I’m looking for!!!!
I will definitely be using those later in my book…

But I’m struggling with a specific scene where I need a lie XDXD and none of these seem to fit…

“Well, what are you waiting for?” the Master spat, motioning for Iver to continue. “You may begin whenever you are ready.”

Sef’s knees sho…

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