@trailblazer
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hybridlore replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 48 minutes ago
It looks a lot better! One thing I noticed is that Antonio does say “fabuloso” twice.
“Then the topic conveniently comes up in a conversation with Easton.”
Also, I feel like this might be better if you just change it to “Then I can ask Easton” or something like that. Otherwise, it looks great! I like the way you made Hallie more rea…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 10 minutes ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 hours, 13 minutes ago
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freedom replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 20 minutes ago
*pops head in*
I’m so happy to see this forum still active and well🥹🥲
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 hours, 43 minutes ago
Awwww!!!
But in six months he’s moving to Florida for college…..😭😭
At least I have a little brother <333 I love him to DEATH…I literally love him so muchhhh
That is so funny that your MC is named Hallie because (I know I’ve told you this before but Imma say it again hahaha) my little sister’s name is Hallie!!! so it’s just…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
and I have already written some scenes for it btw, but most of them are huge spoilers atm🤭
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
@godlyfantasy12 forgot to tag you😅🫠
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
Well, I made the forum, the forum stopped working for me, and I also disappeared off the face of the earth for over two weeks😂💀 well I’ll try to answer questions/responses now😅
@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @elishavet-pidyon @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @koshka @trailbl…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 11 hours ago
Ooh, I’ve also got to add in the part about the gov trying to pass a new law that allows them to persecute Christians, but I haven’t figured out when yet.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 11 hours ago
Great! 😁
Okay, I see what you mean. Are you thinking like, within their friend groups? Most of the story so far takes place either at school, the church meetings, or their house. Later, though, there will probably be a lot of scenes at their respective job assignments, so you’ll get to see more of the culture then. Do you have any i…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 16 hours ago
Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊
Awwww ofccc!!!!
That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m not stealing any of that author’s ideas, I promise!!! just some of the vibes in certain s…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 16 hours ago
But just to clarify, I don’t really ever listen to secular music. I only want to listen to music that glorifies God!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 16 hours ago
What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation? (For those who don’t know, reconciliation is where catholics go (supposed to be at least every month) to confess their sins. And then they are forgiven for them.) And what questions do you have. (That definition is the most simple version, there is more to it.)
I don’t think i…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 17 hours ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 20 hours ago
Ok! That will be something I’ll add to my notes. 👍
Yay! Thank you!!
@savannah_grac2009
Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊
That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m no…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 5 hours ago
@ESTHER-C
OMC THIS IS GONNA BE LIKE MY COMFORT BOOKI JUST KNOW IT
*curls up in a love seat with a chai latte and gingersnap with a fuzzy blanket and fuzzy socks* (those are the vibes your book gives me)
ALSO I WANT AN OLDER BROTHER SO BAD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 5 hours ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 9 hours ago
Very interesting! I’ve nothing to say that hasn’t been said by the others. Excited to keep reading!! 😃😄
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