Trahia the Minstrel

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76

Oh, by the way, Jareth can talk to Crow sorta the way Jocelyn can talk to Nyx, but it’s not telepathic. Also, Crow doesn’t have feathers, he has spikes and scales. The drawing says “As drawn by Feather” because that’s the name of the character who drew it in the story (she’s Jareth’s…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 He won’t hurt Nyx too bad. He’ll claw him, that sort of thing, but his claws are too small to scratch deeply because he’s so young. He’s black, and looks a little like this:

(This is a different creature of the same type, called Stormcloud)

His eyes are on the stripe on his face ; they’re an orange-ish color although the drawi…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76

Just going to do Jareth’s POV for now.

Jareth

“I’m Naja!” said the girl who’d found him. “What’s your name?”

“Jareth,” he said, but she didn’t seem to pay attention and was instead focused on Crow.

“Your puppy! He’s cute!”

Crow squirmed, indignant at being called a puppy, but Jareth…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Nice! And I wouldn’t mind seeing Franz….gives me someone to visualize when I want to smack him…..

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

Trauma club! I’m in, and so are most of my charries! I sorta like chopping characters’ arms off….Or blinding/half-blinding them…..You get the idea…..

Luckily for them and for you, Jareth and Crosshair haven’t gotten really mutilated yet. Unless you count the time Crosshair was…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 SOOO COOL. And I’m not like a huge Marvel person. I’ve seen a few of the movies and liked them, but they’re outranked by my other fandoms. But your fanfics….are great!!!

@freedomwriter76

(sorry for my late response. I don’t check KP as much as I should. XD)

But YESSS!!!!! You should!!! I hope you enjoy them. A NIGHT DIVIDED WAS AMAZING!!!!!! *high fives* I think it’s a must-read for any historical fiction lover!!!

@whalekeeper

So I might not be getting the problem *exactly* correct, but if you’re having a hard time with the pacing of your story, I’m gonna recommend to try plotting it out. Plotting doesn’t have to be all that complicated at all! Basically, there are certain major points that need to happen in every story besides just beginning, middle, and…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Yes, that’s probably it!

@godlyfantasy12 If those drawings are close to what Jocelyn’s actually like, she actually looks a bit like Feather….. Aww and Nyx’s depiction is cute!

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Y’know what? I’m going to write a short rp. You guys can discover him later if you want, but it might take a while before I reply.

Jareth

There were other people!

He couldn’t tell, but he thought he heard his father’s voice in there.

Or was he just desperate?

Crow squealed, having…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Awwww! Why is this story so cute???!!

@godlyfantasy12 I totally don’t mind them finding Jareth in the tower. although I think it should be in the morning, not now.

I’m also going to hold back on rp’ing until something really interesting happens, considering from this point it’ll just be the charries finding some sort of sleeping quarters.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Ok, I’m just gonna do it. Well, actually, he’s gonna do it. (While I live in the U.S. and typically use imperial units, I’m pretty sure the universe my character comes from is accustomed to metric, so that’s what I’m going to use.)

Also, I can’t rp super commonly–only once or twice e…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @koshka

So, we’re scaling the tower? This’ll give my charrie the chance to do something kinda cool. How tall exactly is the tower again?

@ava-blue

Oohhh yes. I love these 🙂

This is a (semi generic) development template I was sent a while back, and the primary one I use now.

I do wish some of the ones I use now had more into their personality, like MBTI questions and such.

Hope this helps!

@freedomwriter76 Yes! Honestly, I’m going to do it now. Jareth’s probably going to wander alone for a little while before he finds the group. Also he has his pet with him–a little creature of my brother’s creation called Crowshadow, or Crow for short cause he’s black.

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 Adding a new character who will…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Oh, really? You’re welcome for noticing! Since he’s actually a “borrowed” character from an already written story, I’ve built onto him a bit. In the TV show he appears in, he’s a rather selfish and slightly cruel character, but he does show evidence that he does in fact care about his siblings (four brothers and one sister). By…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Yep, those three characters sound good! It’s gonna be awkward though when Crosshair tells Eva she reminds him of Feather (his wife)……they don’t look similar but I kind of feel like they’d get along.

Crosshair

Riker’s father snapped some particularly harsh words…..and slapped his…[Read more]