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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @rae @esther-c
Eye colors…..
Mine are brown. Dark brown. But I think for a little while after I was born they were this weird hazel greenish color. Sometimes I wish they stayed that way, but I don’t mind having brown eyes. But when I make OC’s based off myself, I usually give them green eyes.
My characters have varying…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper cool. I only have one brother and a dog, but I know a couple which has five young kids and four adult kids.
oh and fidget toys are very good for him. I have a bin of fidgets. I make fidgets out of Legos. I fidget with that loose piece of leather on the chair if I have to lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper I’ll be praying. I know how it feels to have sensory issues.
Oh, and you have five siblings?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Snake
“My name is Carrie. And, I’m not a native.” The human shook her head, taking a step back. “I don’t know where we are. You’re not from here?”
“I’m not.” Snake told her. “My home galaxy has many habitable planets, but I don’t know this one.”
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 years, 7 months ago
This Generation
This isn’t a particularly encouraging poem. But it’s one of my most recent one. I wrote it after a particularly trying night at youth group. The youth group at my church consists of 90% community kids which is awesome but when there’s almost 50 of them and they have zero church background and most have broken/dysfunctional famil…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c yesss I echo that
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@beth-torres Oh, he’s gonna be startled when she talks and he understands her.
Snake
A human was approaching. He kept down his still-existing urge to strike at the smaller creature, remembering Chief’s words.
“They’re just small, wingless copies of us–not worth eating, and besides, who in their right mind eats a sentient creature?” he’d told…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
@loopylin cool
I love hearing worldbuilding ideas lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I’m glad you’re back!!
I’m also glad Pax will be back in the roleplays. He’s awesome.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins oh btw I know you won’t see this till Sunday, but my dad pointed out something interesting about the tetrachromacy thing we talked about.
He said from a tactical/militaristic point of view, it would be a good advantage for Leo and Crosshair, as snipers, to have better color vision. Think of Cross trying to take out an enemy…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
@loopylin I like those! His clawed feet are cool btw.
I’m assuming all the clothes his species makes are fireproof.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins all righty! See you then I guess!!
(and now you know why I have Tech as my profile pic lol. Like him, I can fill your head with useless info for hours)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
And this condition does stem from genetic mutations, possibly the same ones that cause color blindness. I have a theory that the Bad Batch’s mutations would have either killed them or done nothing but make them weird-looking if the Kaminoans hadn’t tweaked their genes to remove the lethal ones and enhance the ones that would help them. Remember,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins Maybe! I’ve never thought of that, but there are studies on some people (the only ones with the trait are female, but a male could probably be introduced through genetic experimentation, which is exactly what happened) who had extra light-sensing cells in their eyes. It’s called tetrachromacy, and it’s though that those with the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I’d suggest keep her age and change his. It makes things easier.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I put wayyyyy too much thought into this lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins All right!
So, Leo’s arc here–the story we’re trying to tell with her–seems that she doesn’t trust anyone, and is really aloof. Her mom’s hurt her, Varian’s not the nicest either, and she’s heard about how her dad walked out on her. Is there somewhere you’re going with that? Like, she’s going to have to trust Crosshair that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
ok so wanna hear some more stuff I have ideas for?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedowmriter76 if u ever come back, will you show us how far your fanfics have got?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I can see her being less powerful since she’s second-gen. But still.
Can you tell I’m really enjoying helping you brainstorm?
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