TheShadow

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

here we go. Again, love feedback on Aaron here. I’m feeling pretty confidant, so it might all come crashing down. XD

The next evening found Aaron on his knees again. He found he was spending a lot of time that way, and he wasn’t finding any peace. Every night he cried out questions, and never o…

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@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper

k, here’s a new part.

@calyhuge @otherworldlyhistorian @thearcaneaxiom @linus-smallprint

Apologies for tagging y’all. Hope you don’t mind. I’ve started employing the advice y’all gave me, and I wanted to see what you fella’s think before I go any farther with it. Does Aaron still seem like a guy. I mean, would…[Read more]

@rae haha yep

looks like Sniper got back at Silvanis for calling him “weird hat guy” or whatever it was he called him.

@theshadow @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22

Sniper

“…To get past my strong immunity, another thing from my father, it’d have to be some sleeping potion. Though, it could just be they used different m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow

Next chapter. You can all breath now (until you reach the end of this chapter of course). This covered less than what I was hoping to, there proved to be too much to go into one chapter, but that is all right. I will see if I can get Chapter the 13th – The Self-Proclaimed Guardian to you…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @theloonyone @stephie @theshadow @theducktator @keilah-h @grcr @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian

Awesome! This is perfect.

Ok, I have one. This will be mostly for guys, but if any girl’s have ideas…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

btw, how does August 21 sound as a due-date. It’s two weeks from today.

@rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

K…….. after a long deliberation….. I think I have decided. I don’t really have any exciting fantasy characters, cause fantasy’s not my thing. I just have boring old normal people. lol. So, my character is:

Prince Friedrich!

He is the lead in…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

Y’all ready for a character?

@linus-smallprint

AWESOME!

And that is why answering this question is hard.

No kidding!

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper

Ok, I have the next section, but before I go on I would like some feedback on the beginning stages of Aaron’s reaction to his grief.

That night, men and boys slowly trickled back to the large building. The Imperial…

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HA!! It worked!!!

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @theshadow

Ok, here’s whoever I didn’t just send.

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGNLN4vwu8/ho7hf2rHakWJ1OTFshCmlw/view?utm_content=DAGNLN4vwu8&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=editor

hmmmmm, strange. It worked. Then why has it been eating the posts every time I tag people………….

Let’s see if this works.

@theshadow

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!!

Here are Aaron and Sabina

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGNLB5MuwA/CfZLSJQSuKkBbOXrIA6HDg/view?utm_content=DAGNLB5Muw…[Read more]

@keilah-h

and whatever Silvanis was.

XD

@theshadow @theduckatator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronile22

Silvanis

“The only question is why, though, and how.”

“Honestly, I’d almost say my mother and sisters, if you weren’t involved.” Silvanis casually crossed his arms again. “Don’t get me wrong, she isn’t some kind of sorcerous villain like my…[Read more]

@theshadow you’re good! I was just about to ask if we could get back to this lol

@kyronthearcanin @rae @theducktator @princesachronicle22

Sniper

“The only question is why, though, and how.” Trevor replied.

I thought back to my previous experience bein’ transported to a mysterious world, but I found I could remember nothin’ but huntin’ oth…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for understanding. I just feel like all that would be too overwhelming and confusing for me. Ya know. I kinda liked how I had the setup.

Yeah, kinda like a mood board.

@theshadow @whalekeeper

Here is Turin y’all!!!

What! NO!!!! PICTURES ARE BROKEN AGAIN!!!!!! ACK!!

Ok, here is a view link…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Ok, I have never had anyone say this to me before, and a lot of (very picky) people have read it. I think i might leave it alone, because the majority of my readers are fine with it, and I have also read many books that do this and have never had any complaint with them.

Sorry, I’m not sure extatically sure what this m…

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@theshadow oh man you’re actually reading it

glad you like it so far though

I’ll make sure to update it later, I don’t write directly on the google doc, I have it in Word and then copy it over

@theshadow

You tagged me, but this never came up in my email, so sorry for the late response😕

I’m pretty much on the same vain as Whale. Rivals is a pretty general term, but usually you’ll see some parallels between them.

There can be the kind of rival where they are simply trying to one up each other, simply prove that they are superior in…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed @smiley @theshadow

Oh yeah I forgot to put the thing introducing the species in the beginning. Ugh. That’s in the same chat as the drawings

@smiley @freed_and_redeemed you’re not gonna know the fandom this is for but just know that it’s based off a video game series I don’t really suggest getting into but I enjoyed., and I like turned it into a sci-fi thing so now all the characters are different creatures and there’s space travel and stuff.

@theshadow you’ll probably like this…[Read more]