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@koshka

That emoji really shouldn’t fit you in mad author mode as well as it does. XD

🤣

Julian and Leon both it seems, though Leon’s was more of an encouragement and Julian’s a bit of correction.

Still sorting out who’s going to die before the end of this book, so you’ve done well there.

Have you got any guesses?

@hybridlore

Unless he came back at the head of an army….. 😈

@hybridlore

Yes, but that was a direct scripture quotation, and I’m not going to add my country names into that. 😉

Are ya now? What if he betrays them?

@koshka

Gotcha.

If it’s PTSD in particular I don’t have much. I have research on gas trauma from WW1, but otherwise I haven’t got a ton. I do have heaps of info on things happening during the war. Here’s two I have bookmarked.

h ttps://www.history.com/articles/history-of-ptsd-and-shell-shock

h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s651JQxSPlU

@liberty

Black horse for a black rider.

What can I say?

@liberty

that’s all you have to say about that section?!?!

😂

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NEXT SECTION!!

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
November 25th
The Empire

To Wolf, Peter, and the Church in Landstraten,
Greetings in Christ.

Our time in the Capital has been one filled with blessings and the grace of God. We have a sm…

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@rae

That ending won’t leave me alone!!!! Now that I’ve had time to really think about it….. man, it’s good. A delayed hit, but a hard one when it gets ya! 🤣

@hybridlore

No prob! You are 100% last though. 🤣

No wait…. Liberty hasn’t comment yet.

Never mind, you are 90% last. 😝

 

Whatever happened to the prince. . . *shudders* Creepy. Hopefully Leon and Julian will get to talk to him soon.

Yeah.. poor kid.

What do you think of Marius?

@rae

I saw that coming….. sort of.

I didn’t think he’d go back. I thought he would be killed in a fight.

I’m not sure what to think of that. Hmm.I like it, but almost feel doubtful for liking it.

The opening scene with Jenna and Baron may need a little work. It was very intimate and immediately led me to think that they were married.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @hybirdlore @theducktator @keilah-h

The Final Story.

Please note that I might drastically change this one later since I’m not 100% happy with it, but I’ve been changing and playing with this story for so long now that I feel like I need to post it, gather your thoughts (tips for how to make the story better and criticism very…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Hip Hip!

@koshka

Cool! I’ll take a look through my collection and pass on anything i find!

Nooo…. I don’t think I actually did. I remember you telling me you had a sketch, but I don’t seem to have one in my emails. You could email it to me again if you don’t mind!

@koshka

🤣 That would be pretty cool!!

What does his armor look like, btw? I’ve seen some cool sci-fi-ish armor lying about.

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHHHHH!!!!! I love them!!!!!

@koshka

Oh my word. His a face claim!!! without a face.

It’s just an idea.

🤣

believe me, I totally noticed those things, but it was the only photo with the identical mask that i wanted, and I decided that was more important.

@koshka

Um, both? Seriously, the possibilities I’m the next few chapters are very concerning to my author mind.

And with what those two kids have been through?! Already? And you haven’t even had much time to beat them up either, no offense. You seem to like them. I am…concerned.

🤣

Yeah, they’ve been through the ringer. But hey, you’ve got to exp…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Ah, well farms on the edge of starvation are a little more pliable then you I guess.

That’s kinda cool. Though I usually think of Wolf as a last name.

Oh! Well thanks. I really like the name Wolf for a first name. And Wulf. One’s the German spelling while the other is Saxon.

I think you know already from what I have s…

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For anyone who is interested……

The LOS soundtrack!