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@theducktator

Aha, thank you. Fixed that.

Thank you so much for the feedback!!!!

DON’T KILL EVAN. I BEG YOU.

Oh how tantalizing this sounds…….. it would be such a sad death scene……………..

@rae that’s awesome you got to have fun with your friends! Happy birthday!

@keilah-h I’m going to get so depressed if I try to answer that question lol

@whalekeeper :((((

@rae

Yay!!! I am so glad that you had a good time!!!!! And I am so glad that you did it! That sounds like an amazing day!

Also,

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon

I was gonna update you last night, but I figured I’d wait and give you all the tea in one post.

Today we did it! We went out to all the little shops, and it was awesome! Four (three of which I wanted to look at sadly) were closed, but we still got to go to three…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Wow!! You are getting so much better at guys and girls! I can totally tell which is the girl. This looks really good!!

@the_lost-journal

Lol

thanks! That one isn’t out yet, but I do have some e that are published and for sale if you would ever be interested. 🙃

@grcr

OH MY WORD!!!!

Looking at it I suddenly realized how many of them I asked you to draw!!!! I can’t believe you pulled that off! My limit is about three people per picture and then I die. XD

THEY LOOK SO GOOD!!

Put it this way, I looked at it and new exactly who each one was, so that was brilliant!  Oh man, I can’t stop laughing…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Haha!!!

@rae

Oh man!!

I’ll be praying, Ruth! Please keep us updated!

I had a consultation with my doctor yesterday since my bloodwork results finally came in. I have lymes AGAIN. It came as a little bit of a surprise, since I’ve not found many ticks on me this year, but ticks are sneaky things. *Sigh* so here I go, going on a month of antibiotics in SUMMER. Not looking forward to it, as I do rowing/crew, and I have…[Read more]

@hybridlore

hmmm. What do you think of Me just removing the last paragraph completely? Would that be enough?

yes, I designed all of it.

@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore

I made some edits on the cover after some of the feedback I got.

@keilah-h

Lol, my characters are pretty real to me, and I guessed yours were to you. lololol.

You should totally try that!

@keilah-h

I was just listening to Ron’s theme song and I thought you and Sniper would enjoy it. XD

@theducktator

Lol, it’s still in the works. 😉

@the_lost-journal

those are funny. I just did my own because I was in the car and didn’t have access to my quote folder so I did some from my own book because I knew I wouldn’t accidentally misquote them. XD

@hybridlore

lol. Maybe.

Glad it was helpful!

@hybridlore

Lovely. You disabled copy and paste on the doc. Now I have to do it all the hard way. XD

Okay, feedback answers.

OVERALL

What was your overall impression of the story?

Not sure entirely what you are looking for, but I walked away feeling really excited for the next book and also really refreshed as this is one of my…[Read more]

@koshka

Aw thanks!!!

Would you agree, @power ?

Any suggestions. (besides the odd shapes near his neckline…. which was a reminder for me to clean it up with a brush but I forgot until just now.) and the couple typos already mentioned?