TheShadow

@linus-smallprint

It’s good. I like it.

I feel like Alan should have been a bit more remorseful in the end. It felt more like he tried to snitch a cookie and got caught more then he was using black magic. idk. I would have liked a repentance prayer, maybe a few tears, idk. It just didn’t feel real to me. *shrug* that might just be…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Um, not at all their characters, but that’s funny itr makes you think of them.

Lol, That’s funny the David one makes you think of Alan. (Isn’t the hair wrong?)

@hybridlore

I wonder if that’s really going to be a problem when you are reading the book straight through, because William is introduced literally only two scenes…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

sounds good!

@stephie

Yes! These are just what I have running through my mind and never put on paper!

My dad was in the military and is now in law enforcement and one thing he always says is, “When I get shot, I’d rather have A guy carry me out then a woman try to drag me out and end up getting us both killed.” He’s a very tall, muscular guy, and I honestly…[Read more]

@koshka

OH HE WOULD LOVE THAT!

(I would love that!)

That could be funny. And crazy. And possibly dangerous, so maybe we shouldn’t.

It would be so good! We should! We should!

I’d find it far more interesting to RP then a public school anyways. I like it much better, and it’s way better for Rory.

Besides, technically Rory is already g…[Read more]

Everything you said fits. There’s definitely some gothic architecture and old buildings mixed in with the newer technology

@whalekeeper

I love all of these ideas thank you!

Wait, I just realized Brea might be too old to be watch over like that. Oops. XD Well maybe the idea can still be used with another young character.

No, she’s like 9 or 11ish. She was an unplanned kid, so that’s why there’s a big age gap between her and Lois.Your idea totally works.

@theducktator That’s some good advice right there

Didn’t want to make a new topic, so this seemed like the most fitting place for this.

I’m a bit stuck with my story rn and I just need some filler or something. So does anyone have ideas for things my characters could do/trouble they could get into? It could be as ridiculous or mundane as you want, I don’t care. Any idea is a good idea right…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m referring to the women in battle thing.

@whalekeeper

@koshka

I doubt Rory’s going back to school. I don’t know how I’d RP school life after this. 🤣

@stephie

Well, I’m glad to find someone who does agree. It’s a lonely stance.

Hopefully anything I said was helpful!

@whalekeeper

@koshka

Rory

Rory followed Leo to where  bench sat under an awning. They sat down, Quincy still tightly snuggled in Rory’s arms. He was asleep. His mouth was up against Rory’s collar and the fabric was wet.

Silvia looked like she was almost asleep, her shoulders drooping and her hands limp in her lap. Rory let his head and…[Read more]

@koshka

Rory

Rory hefted Quincey higher and wiped sweat from his forehead with his shoulder. Quincey was getting heavy, but there was no way Rory was about to tell Leo that. She merging in him desperately clung to the boy, the one person he had ever met who was weaker and more vulnerable than he was. He had never had to protect something, and it…[Read more]

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STEPHEN

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DAVID

@elishavet-pidyon

Is that a threat?

I love threats!!!!

Yes, she is a lot of fun.

@linus-smallprint

Much better

@elishavet-pidyon

This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.

I’m so glad it’s interesting!

I think by now I’m in the safe zone of not having a dark-haired Aaron instead of a Joseph. With the differences in ploit between the two books, I thi…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

This was the Bible study mentioned in the section right before.

Trying to remember who William and Rose are. Was Rose William’s wife?

No, no, Will was the fellow Joseph was talking to in the inn who was also working to provide a home for his fiance.

Is that what William was supposed to say?

No. I tried to different r…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you.