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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Merry Christmas!!!
Oh I saw that coming! This is good, Linus. I do have one complaint.
This is an emotional moment, but I don’t see much emotion in Alan’s prayer.
I would suggest pausing in between fragments of prayer and describing what Alan is doing and feeling in that moment.
Exactly. This was just what I was thi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
oh me too! I love the redemption characters!!
wait! Rolf Klaus!! Not Rolf Klaus from The Baker Family Adventures?!?!
oh yes, I have often thought of that. I find so many aspects of writing a small reflection of God and us.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
oh I was mostly teasing. Lol. 😂
I would never be comfortable in a place like that from what it sounds like, but Rory might go just because he has no idea what is going on and what a dance even is. lol.
we’ll see if he ends up peeking in there.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@keilah-h Gerald is beautiful <3
I got a sloth that doubles as a microwaveable heat pack. It doesn’t have a name yet though
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I will get to this in juuuuust a second. I think Ruth is on a Christmas trip because she hasn’t appeared in a while.
Actually, I had nothing to post for a few days so I kinda just forgot about KP, and took a break… now I’m back with drawings Andrew really wants me to post, and writings about Baron, and 77 notifications and loads a…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m so sorry if I miss you, I have a lot of posts to go through, and it’s Christmas so 1) MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!! and 2)I might not be able to read and reply to everything until tomorrow
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
(Hehe yay im the first one to say it)
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE 🎄🎁⛄️
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Brea (the library)
“Pre Algebra. I wanted to skip a grade or two, but my parents made me stay in fifth. Apparently I don’t ‘spend enough time with kids my age’. But at least they’re letting me do advanced math.”
She looked down at her book and saw Benny waving up at her from between equations. She rolled her eyes and turned t…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
The beginning has changed SO. MUCH.
The storyline/plot is pretty similar, but it’s definitely different…
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Brea
Brea accepted the help up. The boy’s hand looked and felt weird, but Brea was enough of a lady to know not to point out people’s physical oddities.
She sniffed a couple times and pushed her hair out of her face.
“I’m fine, thanks.”
She scowled down at the ground, feeling the torn knee of her tights. At least it was hi…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I think Seb is forgiven XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings I’d probably shop more if I had people to go with me
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
The Twins
The girls both gave simultaneous excited squeals and scrambled to dry their hands and climb off their stools. The dishes were quickly forgotten.
“So cute!” Eddie said while petting the puppy’s ears. “Never seen this breed before. Only one head.”
“Is it yours?” Ellie asked
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Loopy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper
I don’t really shop much except groceries and the occasional ridiculous impulse buys
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Nope. No redemption for Hans. Plenty of chances in the book I read, but he turns them all down.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
GIRL! That is insanely good!
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