TheShadow

@elette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed

post scenes and break hearts. That’s what I do. And I do it very well, if I do say so myself😝

Yes.

You do.

💔😢

@theducktator

That last one is great XD

Can you imagine the look the librarian would give you over her eyeglasses! “When I was your age we tried to help the neighborhood, not destroy it. Go read To Kill a Mockingbird and make good use of your time.”

@rae

Sef

Please give me the words, she sent a silent prayer up to the heavens.

“His son chose to die for us. He didn’t have to…but He wanted to!” her eyes shone. “But he didn’t stay dead! After three days, He rose again!” She thought about Chase’s other question. “My father abandoned me and my mani when I was four. I had the same ques…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Chase

Chase stared into Sef’s eyes, his aching foggy brain trying to process what she had said. His headache was returning, and with it came that frustration of being unable to understand a concept that’s been explained to you in very simple terms. Then it all broke through the clouds. His eyes brightened. “Oh!” But then they…[Read more]

@calyhuge

Also I have this weird thing where it’s first person, but from Kate’s perspective, even though I’m a guy, and I can’t really help it so we’re stuck with it

If it makes you feel better, I’m a girl who likes doing stuff from a guy’s perspective, first or third person. I don’t think it’s weird most the time, it’s just writers being wri…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Oh wow, your camp sounds so much fun! And wayyy different from ours lol!

Ours is kind of in the middle of nowhere…you’d never expect a camp to be there!

It depends on who is directing the camp that week what kind of teams we have,  but normally we are split up into about four to six teams of different colors. Each team has about…[Read more]

@rae

Sef

“The Great One is what my people call “God”, or “Yahweh”. He created everything,” Sef began. “He created us, and the universe! But then a great darkness overcame the world, and the people living in it. To save us from ourselves, the Great One sent His Son to die in our place! He wants to have a relationship with us, even though we make…[Read more]

@esther-c

Livia

She wiped her eyes, determined to not let another tear fall.

“I haven’t prayed in a while,” she smiled bitterly. She shook her head. “I’m not even sure He hears me anymore. I just feel so…lost.”

@savannah_grace2009

Chase

Never…never be strong enough but…but… Chase closed his eyes, turning away a little bit, afraid that the pictures and memories flashing through his brain would come out in his eyes. Who else is going to help all those people? Those kids that are just like me. I have powers, I need to use them…and there’s the…[Read more]

WOW!! awesome! Thank you so much for y’all’s help. I only have one chapter in a place where I would call it more then ideas. (I just started the book today. I’ll have to put more of it there later. I can’t wait to hear feedback from other authors!

@esther-c

Yes yes yes!!!!!!!

lol that’s so funny though!

Livia

She closed her eyes as he wrapped his arms around her.

But she felt numb.

All she felt was hurt…so much hurt…

“We had to sell Xandro,” all her attempts to keep from crying failed, and she let out a sob. “We had to sell everything and move to the poor district,” she leaned…[Read more]

Ok, so, sorry if it seems like I’m asking the same thing over again, but this seems a little too good to be true. lol.

So, i am currently writing a novel right this minute. If I created a WIP in the novel critiques section, could I put the first chapter there and y’all give me feedback, and then the second chapter and so forth, or is that not…[Read more]

@rae

Sef

“You don’t have to be strong enough,” Sef pulled away and looked up at him. “Because you never will be strong enough on your own. But when you ask the Great One for help, when you are weak, He is stronger!”

@ellette-giselle

So wait, I could submit a book I’m working on in one of the Forums and y’all would give me feedback!

Yes! 😊😊

I am always looking for honest critiques and it’s hard to find someone that will do it because they are all afraid of hurting my feelings. Even though I tell them that it’s not hurting but helping. I think it’s just a th…

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@trailblazer

And I’ve noticed the days that I miss it are the days that usually end up with things not going well or I’m in a bad mental state or something.

Me too!!!

Oh yes, thank you.

So wait, I could submit a book I’m working on in one of the Forums and y’all would give me feedback! That’s awesome!! I am always looking for honest critiques and it’s hard to find someone that will do it because they are all afraid of hurting my feelings. Even though I tell them that it’s not hurting but helping. I think it’s…[Read more]

@trailblazer

And sometimes when you’re used to hearing Him speak a certain way, God switches it up to get us out of our boxes and teach us how to expand our awareness of Him.

Exactly!!

Our culture also tells us to follow our hearts, but it’s not healthy, because emotions are so up and down- they aren’t stable. I heard a pastor say this once: “Emot…

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@keilah-h @theducktator

So, I started reading a First Aid and Personal Safety book of my Grandmother’s from the American Red Cross and it has not only good info to help yourself and others in case of an accident but also a lot of potentials all useful stuff for writing too! Like what to do when someone has an injury to the head, definitately will…[Read more]