TheShadow

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Jonathan just got himself into a bad situation if anyone is…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It was really good! I don’t think I have any comments on that one!

As for what @keilah-h has been saying, I can’t say that I agree. Stuff like that happens, and Like I said before it was not graphically mentioned and it has a purpose. As for age ratings….. ugh, that stuff is so stupid now. It’s been so twisted and more…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Thank you! Yeah I would love help doing a good back blurb. Do you have any ideas or info you need?

@keilah-h

Yes, I do!! You have to order from my company through mail. I have a link to the order forms if you would like me to send you one. So far I have not put it on Amazon yet, though that’s going to be one of the next…[Read more]

@theducktator

No, not a practice tutu, unless she was rehearsing a performance. It would be a satin-like wrap skirt.

@keilah-h @whalekeeper Should we bring this back?

And, Keilah, I’d love if you added Mundy! Mayfly would have so much fun using her powers on him.

Question, should I try to add Tenz?

Y’all…I have to hurry up and post the next chapters so you don’t think I’m just a psychopath teenager…

heh..heh…

Chapter 9

Strange Magic

Lilitu stood at the edge of Farnbron Brook, trying—and failing— not to gag.

The smell was especially bad tonight.

It was always worse during the warmer months, and now it was the middle of sum…[Read more]

@keilah-h

If you don’t mind me asking, are you over 16??

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I’m 14 and don’t turn 15 until September

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I hope I’m correct in assuming that the book will be 16+ as well because oof……that may be the darkest thing I’ve ever seen on this site……

I don’t think I’m going to have it be 16+, more like 14+ since that’s how ol…[Read more]

Anyone who wants to follow me on pinterest click this link (I have a private account so the only people that follow me or can message me have to click the link)

https://pin.it/2Jb0BimYs

@theducktator

Callum and Evelyn are at the cabins

@ellette-giselle

I wouldn’t mind helping if you need it! Though I’ve never written out a full blurb before

@theducktator

Ugh, my reply didn’t load. grrrrrr,

I was wondering if I could give Crystal a skirt with her tights? like a ballet one. (professionals use them. My mom was a professional dancer and an owner of a dance company, and I’ve done ballet a few years myself) anyhow, I dislike outlining girl’s legs like that, and would really prefer…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I think I should have written stuff that should be rated higher then a PG13 if it was a movie. lol. (Violence level anyways.) I think it really matters why you’re writing it and what is the goal and the message and the point. ya know. And also how graphic it is. as it was, Sara’s chapter was not graphic at all.

@linus-smallprint

Lol, does this help.

Ardentan Royal Guard

It’s medieval. Very medieval.

I’ll post some more tomorrow! Thanks for the feedback, I love it!

@freed_and_redeemed

I love the pinterest page!! Great job!

OK, you guys had GREAT feedback! This is just what I needed.

Ok, the blurb on the back…… I am HORRIBLE AT WRITING THOSE!!! I can NEVER EVER write a good one! I hate it when they spoil the story, but I also want them to sound interesting. If anyone is good at writing…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That’s sooo awesome!! I love the art!! I’d recommend softening the word color though, the black is a really sharp contrast with the pale cover, but I think it’s amazing!

@theducktator

I think it should be done however enhances your reading experience, but I prefer to look at the map for a while appreciate the art a little, then hope it will help my mental geography during the book but really knowing that when I look back at it later I was completely off…

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I tagged myself, didn’t I?

@keilah-h sorry, my rp is up there

@theshadow @rae

Silvanis

Trevor drew his knives, ready for the creature to make its move. Silvanis watched Fairy closely as she slowly positioned herself at an angle where she could hit the creature, a strange sly smile crossing her face. As the beast ran for Trevor, Fairy ran towards it. Silvanis was shocked at the move. Fairy was going to…[Read more]

@hybridlore

It sounds really cool! Are you looking for format critiques, or is it too late for that?

I’ll take an critiques you have. (I just may not use them if I don’t agree. lol.) But yeah, critique away! That’s why I showed y’all!