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@keilah-h

AWESOME!!

When’s your birthday?

@keilah-h

also I’m still laughing about “bRiNg a MeLoN” lollll

It’s my favorite thing ever hahaha

@keilah-h

It’s really, really good!

@keilah-h

yessss I get like this too, I decide a scene is cringey, but I like it too much to remove it.

YES YES YES YES YESSSSSS

that’s the most relatable thing I’ve heard XDXD

What are they gonna do to Sef’s little sis?

Well…its kinda a long story and it’s gonna give away a lot (I also need to flesh out the plot wayyy more)

When I have all m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

However, I have also gotten far enough to determine something else. Due to some things such as the romance, I don’t think am in the target audience for your story. I am no longer going to read this. This does not mean your story is bad, it just means that it’s not for me and I think others will be able to give you better fee…

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@linus-smallprint

A cruelly twisted game. They wanted to brake Ardenta. They cut them off from their land for no good reason but to break their spirits. To see Joseph and the others give would be more rewarding than killing them. The people of the Empire have a lot of interesting beliefs about death and dying with honor and such, and seeing…[Read more]

@stephie

I HAVE RIZZ

slayyyy

@the_lost-journal

omccc

I like your name!!! It’s so cool!!!

yeah, just like Hybridlore, I didn’t know if it was your real name or not lol…

But it’s so unique and cool!

I’ve been pronouncing it “Kee-fa” *dies laughing*

@linus-smallprint

wow! Long reply. A little intimidating……

Interesting. I like these ideas. I think I shall certainly use some of them! I like that gentle yet firm approach. It’s a good idea.

Huh. I think this is one of the only times I bring up Adrain….. but I may be wrong. Oh I totally agree that other religions can have…[Read more]

@theducktator

That one doctor. 😷…💀…🪦

@hybridlore

NO! NOT WYOHHHHH!!!!

@hybridlore

😂😂😂

@hybridlore

Kay-fa

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😢 thanks…

@hybridlore

wow. It’s like -30 right now over here.

Huh. Never heard anyone describe him like that. 😅 We’ll have to see!

@grcr

…?

@theducktator

🤷‍♂️

Also, 👽☠️💀👾🤖🎃👹👺🤡

Also, what do you think of creepy things?

@theducktator

I don’t know…I started a pretty creepy story in my school notebook a couple weeks ago.

Hm, but do you frequently write horror?

@hybridlore

Carrot Cake sounds like a character.

Yes. she is a character. (It is meant to be said flatly but it is a joke 😂)

I like how you came up with the different races and how they become empowered when they fall.

Yeah but the fallen are bad, and they only become empowered when they become fallen…

wait… what happened to it? I sent something out, saying:

“I have decided to change the lore and world build of P.I.C.A.F.E.!

I know it is a horror/thriller. but I don’t want it to be super depressing, so instead of the whole world being infected, it is just certain cities and areas! So that was the movement just locked them in from escaping,…[Read more]