TheShadow

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h

2nd SECTION FROM TODAY

Sorry it’s really short. I have to leave. I’ll post more this afternoon or tomorrow, depending on when I get home.

Joseph lay on his bed, sobbing.

Noah had finally decided they could come out of hiding and carried him home. Now Joseph lay and cried. First…

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@hybridlore

lovely.

This is just where an author wants her reader.

And, because I am a nice author, I will give you a little gift and go edit up the next section and post it, all for you yourself.

🙂

@hybridlore

(I’m fighting so hard for Adrian. 😂)

I know, and the sad/funny thing is that it doesn’t matter what you say, this is the 4th draft, so whether he dies or not is already decided and isn’t changing.

Maybe God’s not done with Adrian yet.

Your right.

But maybe He’s ready to call this young soldier home.

I don’t know what his d…

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@hybridlore

(You already killed off Aaron. Isn’t that enough for you?? 😭)

*gasp* how dare you! I never killed Aaron. The Empire did.

So there.

But honestly there are times when you can’t get around it. I’m not killing characters just to be depressing or violent. I’m doing it for good reasons. Plus, I have to follow the rules of my world. It w…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Ah, well, we don’t always get our way.

Don’t do this to your readers. Your book will get thrown across the room. He needs to be rescued. Maybe Julian should help him escape.

lololol,

I wouldn’t throw my books across the room. I love stories where good characters die. It’s so refreshing after all this impossible happily ever a…[Read more]

@hybridlore

And I am not satisfied with the confrontation. They need another scene. *plops down stubbornly* I really love brother dynamics … 😅

ME TOO! I love brother dynamics.

So what your saying is, Julian didn’t yell at him enough and should do some more?

lolololol.

Poor Julian, he must be so hurt and confused.

Anyway. You CANNOT kill A…

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@hybridlore

That’s it.

That’s all you have to say? Nothing about my skilled word choice and flowing verbs!

(lololololol 100% joking!)

Are you getting attached to Adrian?

Btw, there was your Julian/Adrian confrontation. Did it go how you expected?

And then I go and hide because I feel like Koshka is going to have it out for me.

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NEXT SECTION!!!!!!

The days passed one by one. Adrian remained in hiding, and Joseph spent more and more time with him, listening as he told stories of his early childhood with his brother– the days before the army.

Adrain spent hours in study, and Joseph was often at his side, re…

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@liberty

Thank you so much!!!!

@liberty

Oh my goodness!! Can you send me a link!!!!???

Gak! Peter and Ruben’s sister. Not brother.

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Please tag anyone who was involved in this that I forgot to tag!!! And sorry if I’m spamm…[Read more]

@liberty

AHHHHH!!!!!!! FREAKING OUT!!!!!!

I CAN”T WAIT!!!!!!!

@theducktator

Thank you!!

Mom: “Don’t forget you O’s”

Me: “I won’t forget my O’s! If i was to forge my O’s what kind of person would I be?!”

Mom: “A nut?”

Me: “YES!”

Mom: “You already are a nut!”

Me: “Cranberries cranberries cranberries cranberries cranberries cranberries cranberries!” Et cetera

Mom: “Of course her cranberries will come to Ruth when she calls.”

@linus-smallprint

It was actually not Betsy. It was Corrie and Betsy’s Niece, Peter and Reuben’s brother, and it was Peter and Reuben who were under the table because someone had seen them with the Jews and informed on them. (At least, that’s what it say’s in Corrie’s auto biography.)

It doesn’t really change anything tho, and I can respect…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Aw! It’s so sad. I love it.

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh, don’t make me cry…Poor Hans.

I need to write a fanfic one day in which Hans lives! it has to happen!

@kielah-h

like in Freedom’s Fire you see him as mostly heartless and cruel, but in all the other books he is more humanized–he has a brother, he has a family, he has reasons for why he did what he did. Not that the…

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@calyhuge

Oh that makes sense! Yes, the defeating the prophesy junk is stupid unless there is a very valid reason. For instance, I had a character in a book who was cursed by the gods of his people because of a prophesy, but when he came to Christ he was able to flip that on it’s head and say, “you know what, I was cursed. But so are all of you.…[Read more]