TheShadow

(Hehe yay im the first one to say it)

MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE 🎄🎁⛄️

@elishavet-pidyon

Brea (the library) 

“Pre Algebra. I wanted to skip a grade or two, but my parents made me stay in fifth. Apparently I don’t ‘spend enough time with kids my age’. But at least they’re letting me do advanced math.”

She looked down at her book and saw Benny waving up at her from between equations. She rolled her eyes and turned t…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I agree!!!

WHATTTTT

twenty seven!!!!

that’s crazy!

@keilah-h

The beginning has changed SO. MUCH.

The storyline/plot is pretty similar, but it’s definitely different…

@elishavet-pidyon

Brea

Brea accepted the help up. The boy’s hand looked and felt weird, but Brea was enough of a lady to know not to point out people’s physical oddities.

She sniffed a couple times and pushed her hair out of her face.

“I’m fine, thanks.”

She scowled down at the ground, feeling the torn knee of her tights. At least it was hi…[Read more]

I think Seb is forgiven XD

@mineralizedwritings I’d probably shop more if I had people to go with me

@whalekeeper

The Twins

The girls both gave simultaneous excited squeals and scrambled to dry their hands and climb off their stools. The dishes were quickly forgotten.

“So cute!” Eddie said while petting the puppy’s ears. “Never seen this breed before. Only one head.”

“Is it yours?” Ellie asked

@mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper

I don’t really shop much except groceries and the occasional ridiculous impulse buys

@liberty

Nope. No redemption for Hans. Plenty of chances in the book I read, but he turns them all down.

@elishavet-pidyon

GIRL! That is insanely good!

@grcr

I like it

@liberty

How about checking back with everyone Jan. 1st?

@mineralizedwritings

Aw, poor Lesli. That scene is so sweet but sad <3

When is CWW?

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad to hear that!

@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@savannah_grace2009

It’s good! definitely a better place to start. I like it, and I like the way your characters seem better shaped.

Keep it up!

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

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