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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I don’t know who fell apart worse, them or the church in Clonabay.
Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heavan will be.
mkay, that works. I’ll try to pull some of that in.
Have these three actually been participating in idol worship, or is J…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Hmm, the problem is, I’m trying not to drag things like “greek” and “hebrew” in because that muddies the world a bit because it is technically an alternate reality.
Well, it’s a bit of a chopped up version (due to space. Who made the rule of 100 characters anyways?!) But it’s a Chesterton quote that reads,
“The great march of…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Leander was about to reach the top, when a strange looking vine started crawling towards him. Leander moved away from it, but there was another one coming from the other side. Leander was surrounded by the snake like vines.
Hey, you read my mind! I was going to say that the hedges did something like this when anyone tried to…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
The Protector-Gabriel
“I’m called the Protector.” His voice remained the same, and he made no movement to bow or show any recognition to Leander’s princely status.
I know, it’s short, but Gabriel doesn’t talk too much unless he’s in a banter mood, which does occasionally happen.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
The Protector-Gabriel
“If we stick as a group, it will be easier to keep others from falling to harm, but it also means we will cover less ground and it will be therefore longer before we can find enough of those purple balls to send everyone home.” The Protector ignored Leander’s last question. “Sticking as a group will keep…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I was watching a YouTube video, checked my notifs quick and there it was
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
The Protector-Gabriel
The Protector looked at the vines, then at the strange cat-like person in front of him. “I don’t mind at all.” He spoke with an even tone, as if every word was measured. “But please be less reckless.” Even though he issued a request, his voice remained the same, showing no emotion. His voice was as blank…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
OOOOHHHHHH! Let the fun begin *evil villain laugh*
One sec, I’ll write and rp right now…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@anyone
The Protector-Gabriel
The Protector watched the events unfold in silence, sitting comfortably on a rock. Through the rune over his left eye, for a split second, he could see his little cottage home where the Fourth Protector waited through the purple ball. Once the boy went through, he saw his home no more.
The Protector sighed. This…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Are you saying I did a good job at describing him?!?!?! YAY!!!!
Yes, you did a good job. Gold star: ⭐
But that’s not to say the that his actions are safe….
Lol. Yet another thing that will make him and Gabriel clash. Gabriel also will plan out his moves, but he’s very careful. In his line of hobby, work, duty, wha…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I forgot tagsss
@rae @the_lost-journal @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator ^^^
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Omniscient
The tiny man standing before the group of strangers held his showman-like pose and waited expectantly. There was a long silence. Someone coughed.
“Oof. Tough crowd.” The man said defeatedly.
“Who are you?” Someone from the small crowd finally spoke up. It was a tall, white haired girl.
“And where are we?” A curly haired boy who was…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Just for these reasons:
Exactly. I kinda saw some of those points coming when I read Leander’s description.
In Character Party, we had literal fights between characters. We resolved things a little, and no one died, but my poor Nahim had a concussion, and the other characters…oh Zaren ( @highscribeofaetherium )and Nahim had a…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh wow I’m glad so many people are interested! Would you guys like me to write something for some of my characters first to get things moving?
Also, side note, the little imp guy is not a character anyone can write for. He will just be my character and he will act as a sort of guide to the others.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Thanks.Yeah, they’re like right at the center of everything, so it’s not easy.
Ah, yes. It was a run-on sentence into the next paragraph, and I tried to clean it up with punctuation and forgot to change some words.
The definitions are the literal Greek translations for that word. There are two words in Greek that make up…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
The next morning after breakfast, Julian and Leon began making their way along the streets looking for the homes of the three men they had left to lead the church: Konner Krüger, Reinhold Meier, and Fox Keller.…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh dear, Leander, Hunter, and Gabriel may clash…
this rp may be filled with that sweet drama like in Character Party *evilly taps fingertips together*
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
lol
Anyone can be good at art if they practice.
Glad you like his character. He doesn’t have a written story yet, and I wasn’t planning on giving him one, but maybe I should change that decision.
Also, your forum signature is really funny.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Ooooooooooh! Interest officially peaked. (Barnes always peaks my interest, but now more than ever, which is saying something.) Gabriel will most certainly pry into that one…
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