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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
@felicity @folith-feolin @theloonyone @loopylin @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @anyone
Ok so I’m not entirely done with chapter two… but I’m too excited to wait 😂.
@whalekeeper and @folith-feolin you guys know a bit more than the rest of us about the new character here because I’ve roleplayed with him and your characters. Try not to spoil…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Ok so I’m going to have a description of Evelyn here, kinda sad I’m not drawing her like I usually would, but tbh I’m pretty bad at drawing girls, especially if I haven’t had time to figure out their expressions.
Evelyn is 5′ 5″, she has the same burgundy (we don’t question how that happened ok, it’s…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
I forgot to do Lyla’s bio too 🤦🏻♀️😂.
Lyla is 13 years old, and Matthew’s twin sister. She is actually only 8 minutes older than Matthew😂. She has light brown hair with a touch of blonde. And she has blue eyes. She’s a lot feistier than Matt. In fact, she usually protects him from the common bulli…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
Time to introduce the girls! We should probably add character descriptions for them.Beth, Simon’s older sister, is 17 and has shoulder length dark brown hair. She is very practical and introverted. Carmen is Carter’s sister and is about the same age as him. She is very skinny and has wavy str…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
That is such a cool idea!! Let’s totally do that! And Loopy, you captured Matthew’s personality perfectly👍😊!
Matthew
After Kaine climbed over the wall, we found the stairs he had spoken of and met back up with him, Carter turned to me, his eyes sparkling with mischief.
“Hey, Matt. I’ll race you to t…[Read more] -
MineralizedWritings posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
I read back through the draft I showed yall, lol I left my note of Tauren’s mom as “Insert name” 🤣🤣😂 Oops I didn’t mean to leave that.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6
Kaine
Kaine drops down on the other side of the rock wall, landing in some brush. He watches as the others climb down the stairs and reach the ground.
“Hey, Matt. I’ll race you to the castle.”
Kaine looks on as the two boys tear off through the tall grass and shrubs in a burst of energy.
Kinda looks…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @anyoneelseonhere
I just had a somewhat creepy idea for a random hall somewhere in the castle that is lined with renaissance portrait paintings of every character that has ever been in the castle. Every time a character joins, their painting…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone
Simon
“I’ll meet you guys on the other side.”
Kaine dropped out of sight on the other side of the wall.
The rest of the group followed his instructions, found the stairs, and got to the other side. Once they had met up again with Kaine, Carter turned to Matthew, a spark of mischief in his e…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @loopylin Sorry if i forgot somebody!
Kaine
Kaine’s boots scrape down the rough wall as he tries to climb up higher. Pulling on a small crimp in the wall, he heaves himself up a foot higher, bringing his body in close to the hold. His hand holds tight to the edge on the large rock, but he feels his fingers slowly…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
I watched some smoe nova, he was very entertaining!
Lol yeah 🤣 It’s been a long time since I watched his stuff, kinda glad you said that, it made me revisit his channel!
🤣 Yeah, interest is pinterest Thanks! 😊 The three heads are characters from Unordinary, one of my webcomics.
Oh cool!
😁 I want to try digital art someday, but I…
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
Matthew
”Oh yeah?” Kaine said, looking at me, brows furrowed. I knew he was wondering why I stuttered so much. Quite frankly, I wasn’t sure! I always got nervous when I was around new people, if I’m around a pretty girl, or if I’m afraid something happened to Lyla. And when I get scared, I stutter.…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Ooh, Jazza! He has a lot of helpful stuff. And is entertaining.
Yeah!
I also like Kesh, both his style and because he has a lot of really helpful advice.
Oh haven’t heard of him!
Some others are Sam Does Art, Andymation, Scott Christian Sava (although mostly just YouTube shorts), Alisa Chung, Proko, SLEW, Alpay Efe, uh Kiptoe (I’m ju…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Also feel free to post multiple, it’s ok if you have to put them in like three separate posts.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Pinterest has some really good tips and a lot of awesome reference photos. I love it
Oh yeah! I tend to use google images for reference photo’s, but pinterest sounds good too! My sister passed along a art book to me that I’m probably going to be using for reference. It’s on realistic styles, but I think it still has some great stuff…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh yeah, I have a very long list of things I have to practice on. I’ve kinda been breaking it all up and getting good at one at a time. It takes a while, but I’m getting to the point where I can draw a whole body. Like I spent a really long time just drawing faces, and within that I spent time on each part of it (eyes, hair, etc.) Thi…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, definitely a lot of work, but it would be so cool in the end!
Yeah! I hope so!
I remembered one of your drawings being a miner-looking boy with a headlamp and a pickaxe so I guessed they could probably be the same.
Yup! That was Tauren.
I think that I’ll just write the entire thing and then go through and heavily edit it. Al…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Thank you so much! Glad you like it 🙂
Yeah! graphic novels are a lot of work 😅 I’m looking forward to it though. I haven’t started on most of the drawing of the story because I still have sooo much to learn about drawing people at angles. Yeah! All the character’s I post art of here are from this WIP. In fact I think I’ve got some…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Kaine
“Oh yeah?” Kaine says, noticing Mathews stuttering.
Is he just nervous? Or does talking about his sister make him nervous?
Kaine looks up at the imposing wall. Small rock portions jut out of the side, and it’s streaked coloration shows it’s age.
Have to find Evelyn.
Kaine puts his hand on the wall, feeling for a good spot to grip.…[Read more]
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Lol, yep! It’s totally fine, girl! It happens XD.