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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Vulkasin wasn’t alone. Zlatan’s golden eyes narrowed as he studied the girl a moment. Brown hair and eyes, worried face. She stared at him as if he would eat her.
Novembré stepped out behind him. “So, you’ll help me then?”
The girls face flashed with light at her sudden smile. “November!”
The lad’s face…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
And November and Ara are awesome! I keep laughing with every new VP of his.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks! I will admit I may have used my two best MCs, but their also my favorite, so…and Vulkasin really does need development.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Vulkasin
The girl had come to a halt a few feet away. She looked as frightened and out of place as the lad inside the armory.
“H-hello. I…” Her voice trailed off.
Then she took a deep breath and looked Vulkasin straight in the eye, a feat for anyone considering his height.
“My name’s Arabella Fabel.” She dipped her head politely. “I’m…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I like long ones! =)
Zlatan
In an instant November had changed from a fumbling bundle of nerves to a lad staring at Zlatan with a look ready to tear down walls. “Have you seen Arabella? She’s my…She’s my friend.”
Zlatan’s smile returned. The lad could be a fighter after all. “Neh, I ‘ave not seen any living soul ‘ere beside y…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan
The lad was obviously in an emotional breakdown. He was pulling his hair and jabbering.
“Point is, I..ah, really didn’t mean to do any of this! It just kinda…happens.” the lad grimaced. “So…if you could…not mention this? Or…umm…not lock me away for all eternity?” He smiled but his eyes were still terrified.
Zlata…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson Yeah, now you see why I hate Rampart. (Smacks him several times also) But yeah, the hero character in this show’s case–Hunter–I could talk for miles about him. He’s just plain awesome. As are his siblings (four brothers and one sister, although one brother turns evil).
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
The brothers strode down the hall, swords drawn, shields ready. Whoever had dragged them who knew how far to lock them up in a closet, not even the dignity a real cell, had much explaining to do.
Vulkasin gripped the handle and pulled. This door swung open with the ease of a well mannered fox. Zlatan held his shield up…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
That’s fine with me! Also, it may be good to keep them human here, as some things about wolf nature really only work in the right story…such as sudden madness at the taste or smell of blood. *Shrug* So what if I may be ignoring thumbs in my books?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh, I forgot to mention, the twins have an accent, but by the end of this thing I mostly gave up. It’s a pain to write in first draft. XD
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Vulkasin slammed himself against the door, again. This time he was rewarded with a bruised face.
“Getting anyvere?” Zlatan’s voice cut through the fog inside Vulkasin’s head.
“Neh. You…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Some nicknames for Kent Briggs are Wiggly Worm, Ol’ Chiefy, Captain Thistle, and Kelntot Briggyrot.
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Power replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh, this looks like fun!
Please welcome, Kent Briggs (Who need a lot of work). He is 21, the husband of Lucy Biggs, and “Chieftain” of the older village kids’ “clan” (Though, he is a lot less active than he use to be before he got married). Oh, and he’s a leopard.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ooooooooo! This is awesome!
So, hi! I am Koshka (or at least that’s who I am around here, bwahaha) and here are my characters; 17 year old twins Zlatan Vulkasin, who though wolves in my book will, for convenience, be human here. That are wearing swords, a shield strapped across the back, and an open-faced Rus style helmet. Zlatan will also be…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic *Ahem* functional character problems in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
@Denali-christianson You don’t have to add other skin tones etc. if, say, all of the characters in the story come from the same place. Look at how the world is separated. Yes, in America and a bunch of other places there’s mixed ethnicity all over the place, but for the longest time the light-skinned people were mostly concentrated in Europe,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson Trust me, he doesn’t deserve it. I mean, if he becomes a good guy later in the show (which is extremely unlikely) I’ll be like “That guy? Really?” but maybe I’ll forgive him a little. He’s just…Selfish. And he left his most loyal follower/lackey to die, and then NOT AN HOUR AFTERWARD destroyed the city the aforementioned…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson All righty then! Also, sad for who? Him or me?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Is it ok if the characters on here are from fanfics–like characters I created for a specific world that wasn’t mine? Or do only original characters count?
Also, the thing about the outer ramparts…. Funny story, there’s a villain in one of my favorite TV shows whose last name is Rampart (I have no idea why), and whenever I hear the word in…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I KNOW, RIGHT?!?!?! (I screamed out loud the first time I saw this topic, LOL.)
Tell me, since you’re new to this topic: who’s your favorite character in the WFS?
And thanks, I love Oskar’s quotes! (That one’s my fave). I even made a document of all his quotes so I could quote them randomly to all my friends. xD
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