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Koshka replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Great chapter!
Um, here’s a thought from another side of things. Maybe don’t use it here, but it could be useful later? I don’t know.
There are other perfectly accurate ways to cover what Ruler has done, one of which I believe would work quite well. Instead of trying to hide it, have him say something like, “there are many ways…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
NOOOO!!!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Okay, I’ve been a bit worried for our little lad. As long as Ara can keep with him he’ll be fine. (I really love those two)
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Koshka replied to the topic Y'ALLL!!!!! I started it…and I love this already!!! <3 Any thoughts? 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
AHHHH! I love it!
So, the normal human being part of me is horrified, but the history nerd author? She grinned through most of those chapters whispering “she got it right. She got it right!”
Although I am still a tad bit confused over their whole ‘still living in the same house as their father even though their Jews…’. this…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
I’ve been waiting for his elven flame since I first learned about it!!!! It was AWESOME!
Okay, so maybe I’m being a tad dramatic, but I did say I’ve been waiting a long time.
I can try to RP, only I don’t really know what to have anyone say or do, so I a little lost.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Well then, Erich, Almarrin, maybe you two should run into each other. Although, is Erich going to the club? If so Almarrin can wait, but if not…who’s going to keep the ‘winged brats’ distracted enough not to notice their brother’s gone?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 All right, that’s totally enough! I can see where you’re coming from, I normally don’t share a lot of info either,
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 awesome paws. How old are you?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
I’m with you! *Cracks knuckles* Let’s go track them down.
Almarrin
The hall was quiet like a testing field right before the bomb blew. Or maybe more like the silence of the aftermath.
Avoiding notice, Almarrin slipped down the hall and vanished behind the office door. All was quiet on the other side.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Oops, poor fellow. I’d better hunt him down.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ahh, gotcha. I just was suddenly wondering, “where are my characters again?” XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh, and is Inglor still with Luna?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Okay, that will make more sense for her arc…and be even more wonderfully confusing for characters. XD
I think Elishavet set it up so you could show up whenever. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Wow. Look what happens when I step off for a day. These were really fun to read through!
Eira is an Alve, although she has Forester blood too. Without an idea of who she is, she has been raised in an orphanage that doesn’t believe the Light exists, and that the Alven are mere fairy tales. She is taught first of all the Light, t…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Dietrich, stop that!! I’m 15 and I sleep with SEVERAL things I’ve had since I was 1. So THERE. *glares at him*
And there’s some comfort for Paxton, I guess….poor little guy….
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @wilder-w
Hunter
“Ugh…hate to cut this short, guys, but I need to get to class.” said one of the boys.
“I do too. I have history, what about you?” Beta asked.
“Hey…I have history about this time!” Hunter told her.
Beta smiled. “Great! I know where it is. I’ll take you there…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 oh ha ha….funny thing when I saw what November could do.
Remember when I mentioned Kallus a while back ago?
As a dragon (like Kad if you’ve read those RP’s), he can do basically the same thing as November can, set himself on fire….Although it doesn’t hurt him at all.
So when I read that i was like “Oh that’s really cool!”…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Hunter
The wolflike human slammed the bully’s jaw, making him release the boy.
“What’s going on?” a voice asked. A female voice, but not Omega’s.
A small raptor watched. She was little–probably younger than all of them–but her claws were sharp.
“Hopefully, nothing now…” The wolfb…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Kad
“Can you stand?” Ellie asked.
Eddie nodded, staggering a bit but finding her footing eventually.
Kad eyed the red creature–Dante–suspiciously. It’d take a long time for him to gain a dragon’s trust.
(that was kinda short but ok, I guess)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Go for it!! Bring Grimm in, I don’t mind! I’m actually going to bring in one of my other characters now. @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @wilder-w
Hunter
“Leave us alone, Hunter, dragon boy, or he gets it.” The bully grabbed another kid who’d tried to help and held him close.
Hunter tensed up. He didn’t want any…[Read more]
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