@thelobsterlover
Active 1 year, 5 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins all righty! See you then I guess!!
(and now you know why I have Tech as my profile pic lol. Like him, I can fill your head with useless info for hours)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
And this condition does stem from genetic mutations, possibly the same ones that cause color blindness. I have a theory that the Bad Batch’s mutations would have either killed them or done nothing but make them weird-looking if the Kaminoans hadn’t tweaked their genes to remove the lethal ones and enhance the ones that would help them. Remember,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins Maybe! I’ve never thought of that, but there are studies on some people (the only ones with the trait are female, but a male could probably be introduced through genetic experimentation, which is exactly what happened) who had extra light-sensing cells in their eyes. It’s called tetrachromacy, and it’s though that those with the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I’d suggest keep her age and change his. It makes things easier.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I put wayyyyy too much thought into this lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins All right!
So, Leo’s arc here–the story we’re trying to tell with her–seems that she doesn’t trust anyone, and is really aloof. Her mom’s hurt her, Varian’s not the nicest either, and she’s heard about how her dad walked out on her. Is there somewhere you’re going with that? Like, she’s going to have to trust Crosshair that…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ahhh, Cefin! I forgot for a moment who that was, the poor dear.
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Koshka replied to the topic An aggravation over Stained Glass in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 7 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley
Jayson
The girl looked almost angry. Frustrated? Uncomfortable. Destressed. I glanced around at the dim hallway and cobwebby stonework. Was she claustrophobic perhaps?
Marek paused mid step as if he’d forgotten something, or forgotten to forget. “So…”He looked at us with a wonky blank smile. “do any of you guys ha…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
ok so wanna hear some more stuff I have ideas for?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedowmriter76 if u ever come back, will you show us how far your fanfics have got?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I can see her being less powerful since she’s second-gen. But still.
Can you tell I’m really enjoying helping you brainstorm?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 awww ok! See you….sometime, i guess.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I could tell lol
does that mean she’s also got superpowerful eyesight? Like, with training and a decent rifle, she could hit things from as far away as he can? (For reference, the “10 clicks” Hunter mentions when he first introduced Crosshair is ten kilometers, or about six miles. No sniper in our world has ever managed to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Trust me, you don’t want me to go into a possible family tree rant.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins it certainly would be…
Except I’m not saying your charrie and my charrie are literally the same person. What I’m thinking of is two separate timelines, in which what would be the same character went through different situations. Something happened to Cross’s love interest in your story (idk her name here, but the charrie in my…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium I see. Makes sense, since she doesn’t have to copy a whole mind for a non-sentient creature.
Hey, maybe that’s how they meet him–they see a dragon fly overhead, she tries to imitate him but can’t and realized he’s a sentient being, likely as lost as they are?
It’s not a great idea but I just wanted to throw it out there.
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Koshka replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
EEEEEEEEE!!!!! You’re back!!!!!
You got a cat?! I love cats (obviously)!
I’ve been off for the past month, but I should be back for a while again.
Vulka and Zlati send greetings, as well as-
*Suspenseful violin interlude*
The Vilder.
*Hands you a bowl of raspberries*
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Sorry y’all, I was out the the Kingdom for a awhile.
Smiley, I think it’s your turn. Would you like to go? =)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collin ah ok makes sense!
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