@thelobsterlover
Active 1 year, 3 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint okay, cool!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Why thank you. He’s come a long way.
Leo
He slipped his handkerchief into Rory’s. The work fridge down here had a case of water bottles. Leo got one, opened it, and set it on the small table by the couch.
“I’ll get a few things tied up and we can go.”
First, to message Liko and Silvia. He set his glass tablet down on the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
You’re welcome. =D
Leo
His eyebrows rose. The church?
“Alright.” He wouldn’t question it.
“We can take an early lunch break in a few minutes. Or we can go by after work. Whichever you want.”
He’d message Liko and tell him he had to leave early. And he’d send a number over to Silvia to let her know where they’d be.
The kid…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Leo
He took Rory’s hands in his own, forcing him to stop cutting his palms.
“Rory, you’ve been carrying a lot of things on your shoulders. What you’re telling me–that was wrong. Horribly wrong. But it’s not your fault.”
He pulled the kid into a hug like he was five year old Quincy. Rory was shaking.
Leo sighed, and began to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Poor kids indeed.
Leo
He sucked in a breath through clenched teeth, and slowly let it out. He was not cut out to be a counselor, alright.
But he was a brother. Leo pulled a handkerchief from his pocket.
“You haven’t let yourself grieve, have you? When did this happen?”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper HTTYD is PEAK FICTION and you can’t tell me otherwise.
I do love how well done the disability stuff is. Like, it’s important to the story, but it’s not the whole thing. Hiccup and Toothless have personalities besides their respective injuries. Although it makes for some funny moments:
Tuffnut: Hiccy! A moment? Listen, I’ve been…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Bwahaha. YES.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Leo
Fury, red hot and searing, boiled up in his throat. Leo closed his eyes, trying to choke it down.
Inexperienced, trainies, used as test pilots. No escape plan. Destress calls ignored. Fire,screams, acrid smoke. And the lost. His fists clenched.
Stay calm. Keep control for the kid. He doesn’t need your anger.
He exhaled…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
you should totally draw it when you’ve figured it out though, that’d be so cool.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon yeahhh Jo doesn’t really fit him.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
GE as in Green Ember?
I have no idea. Not a lot of characters are the short, stocky, good with an axe type.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper that’s cool. Since I usually write fanfics, I like to connect it back to something that’s already happened. If a character was, say, shot in the leg once canonically, I might have issues with that come back later (his leg might be stiffer, he might walk with a limp, maybe he even needs a prosthetic because the wound got wor…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Leo
He blinked in the dim lighting. No good memories, huh. And no childhood either. He’d just have to what he could do about that.
But the kid had been training as a pilot. Had crashed, like Jake. The terror still clung to him too. Leo swallowed and put an arm around the kid’s shoulders.
He let the quiet of the basement deep…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper oooh that’s always fun.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle But you have to leave at least one alive! Then you can have survivor guilt and mental trauma and all that jazz. And maybe, they can find hope in another book.
I still don’t get how you actually want all your favorite characters to die before the end of the book lol. Like, aren’t there any that you’d rather see live…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@theducktator that last one!
I’m all of those how—
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Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I like it so far. I’m not super immersed in the world yet, but that’s cause I have no idea what the world is, and whether these characters are human or something else.
A short section like the one at the beginning of Wingfeather Saga might suffice, the one that introduces the world of Aerwiar and the continent of Skree with its towns.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
“You do not have clearance”
HAHAHAHAHAAAAAA
now to go back to crying at the sad animated tale of a shooter game character who couldn’t respawn lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
wow you made me go from crying about a tragic animation I was watching to smirking about how I’m the second person on that list in like milliseconds lollllll
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