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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
I also have the drawing I based the original scene off of if anyone wants to see it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Ah, I understand. I mostly wrote MG now, but there was a time I stepped back, looked at my writing, and was just like “Teens won’t read whatever this is, but is sure can’t be for kids.”
But then learned a few things and grew a little more, and you know what? It’s okay. Kids live in a dark world too. It’s a matter of perspective. Their…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
@everyone but @rae especially
This….barely counts as the story of a scar, or a short story. LOL.
I had a much better one in mind
but just didn’t have the drive to write it.So I pulled out a scene I had written for practice and added some extras to it, polished it down, etc.So instead of a clear, nicely written short story, you get three…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Ahhh! Animal fantasy! And, as I presume although you could definitely be going for older groups but, are you writing middle-grade?
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Will it let you request access?
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
*Nods seriously*
Oh I know. I wish there were more of y’all guys on here so I could properly interrogate y’all and try to understand how you think.
Like, how?!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@rae I’m working on mine as well, although if I don’t get it done by today am I out? Like, is it ok if I get it up tomorrow?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle whoa, great drawings!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@savannah_grace2009 that’s good! I’ll be praying for you and your family.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@rae @everyone else yeah I’ll get to this today, but it won’t be for a while lol. I had a story concept in mind, but never finished it so I’m just gonna redraft one I already had and was gonna share earlier but didn’t get around to it…..lol
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Yep. Poor kiddos. Who knows, she may decide to write a story based on that “wild dream” and accidentally keep his memory (the things an author thinks).
At least they didn’t get sacrificed.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
And yes, Celtic fairies are horrifying.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I forgot to do this. I’ll try to join in another time though.
O.O Wowzers. I knew he would die, but I hoped she’d remember him.
EEEEEE. You know what I think of this story. =D
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@linus-smallprint oooh awesome! and you’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
a little like this but a grizzly bear instead of a polar bear, and more vicious?
(not my art)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
If you’ve ever seen the first Puss in Boots movie from Dreamworks, there’s a giant mama goose that actually does a good amount of damage to the town she invades while looking for her chick, who the main characters stole. Basing on that alone (I’ve never met a free-roaming goose, that I remember at least), I can see just an ordinary giant goose…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@linus-smallprint oh, good to know I’m not alone then! It’s not discouraging at all, it’s just one of those thoughts you have when you’re trying to sleep but your brain won’t let you. Y’know.
And I’m glad you have an explanation ready for why this section feels rushed. Makes sense.
and bruh that Canada meme! We have somethin’ like that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@grcr you’re welcome 😁
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@linus-smallprint ooh interesting!!
Alan’s character development is showing through! It does seem a tiny bit sudden, but I don’t know cause I’ve never actually seen a person get saved and them follow their life immediately afterward. I was saved when I was really young and effectively don’t even remember it, so I can’t even use myself as an…[Read more]
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