TheLobsterLover

@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf

I can.

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Oh! I just reread your question. Perhaps they should meet up here, but they could also find the door left open/slashed and think “That’s funny. We should be on guard.”

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I’m not sure how sci-fi will work with my 10th century charies. If they do meet I think it should be after the kitchens.

But I’ll roll with whatever.

@godlyfantasy12 Rinzler is definitely that type, actually….

Feather’s the more we-stick-together sort.

@e-m-trepke

Rinzler slashed the door in two with one of his discs. He lowered his voice. “I don’t trust him, Feather. Not at all.”

“I don’t either.” Feather eyed the hallway as she stepped in. “But he’s the only other person we’ve seen here. We need to work together, at least for now.” She turned to the man, still behind them. “I told you my…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Aaack, Riven makes me so mad!! I feel so sorry for November now. (They kinda remind me of the characters Cassius and Keefe in the series Keeper of the Lost Cities.) Weird question, but where did you get the name November?? Please don’t tell me that’s more of Riven’s verbal abuse.

@e-m-trepke Here’s the next part.

Feather and Rinzler

“Are we not at one of the emperor’s estates?” the man asked.

“That’s nonsense.” said Rinzler. “We haven’t seen any troops around here. No starships either. Nowhere are there any Imperial symbols, nor is everything gray and boring. My friend here? Her husband’s ex-Empire. She knows what an…[Read more]

@madelyn

Uh, I’m not entirely sure, but I’ll give you an outline of what I’ve done.

I’m supposing you already have your character/s discovered for the most part, so-

I read To Save a Cat Writes a Novel.

And warped that advice to fit my own needs.

But what exactly did I do?

Well…

WARNING: THIS MAY BE UNINTELLIGIBLE AND HORRIBLE ADVICE.…[Read more]

@emilysf @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

I shall keep it then! =)

Ooooooooo…I like that scene.

You asked for a long one?

Zlatan

“Down means we’re closer to the exit, right?” There was a faint desperate gleam in Novembré’s eyes.

A very different gleam shone in his brother’s. “Ah, let’s hope so. Of course, it could mean Ve-”

“It should.”…[Read more]

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Sorry, I’m trying to write around work so, I will be a minute. You don’t have to wait on me!

@emilysf @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan and Vulkasin

They started off down the hall, Zlatan feeling as if he was back in his second year training with twenty-four first year students all unintentionally pushing their Student Officer, Zlatan, near insanity.

I always used to wonder why Commanders were grey headed.

He had survived that,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, poor November. (Marching ration may or may not be based of MREs)

AWESOME!

*Hands you a balloon which explodes sending more confetti everywhere*

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Zlatan and Vulkasin

“Like valking.” Zlatan’s eyebrow rose, “Ever heard of it?”He swiveled to the others before his brother could respond.

He decided to treat this as a counsel among officers, not a muster of troops.

Start with the object.

“So, ve need to pick von of zees passages and try to find a vay down.”

Next state…[Read more]

Oh dear…to be honest I don’t understand some of those, but that last one is great. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Oh that’s fine! He’s always doing stuff like that whenever he isn’t serious…if he is ever serious.

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Vulkasin and Zlatan

He couldn’t help it anymore. Oh he tried, but November just kept adding to his mirth.

He finally got himself under control again, as Zlatan was giving him the Elder Brother look.

And then November nearly burst his reserve again. “Oooh…I just thought since food was involved, ya know, butter….” He glanc…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That made me laugh so hard!!! XD

@emilysf

Ok, I did! =)

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Alrighty!

Zlatan and Vulkasin

He’d done it again, gone off singing aloud with other people around. He sighed.

“That….that was beautiful.” Ara said softly. “What was that song?”

Zlatan shifted his shield, but kept his eyes out the window. “Forgive me, it vas, ah, song of ze seasons.”

“He just made it up and doesn’t v’…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf

Is Sofia next?