TheLobsterLover

@freedomwriter76

Aww…now I really may cry.

I love broken characters! They grip me deep, like no healthy one can.

To be completely honest I sort of liked him more than Riker at first. Now they’re pretty even.

@freedomwriter76

YOU KILLED LEON!?! *Bursts into tears*

How could you?*sniff*

I liked him…*gasp*

And you just BUMPED HIM OFF! *Sob*

Good scene. Thank you for ending it on a higher note.

*Sniff*

@keilah-h

I know practically nothing about star wars, so as far as I’m concerned he could be your own creation. =)

@freedomwriter76

You’re fine! I’m actually working today, so I haven’t had time to catch up till now.

(Poor boys.)

Mikkel

Cold relief poured down Mikkel’s neck.

“No, sir. I haven’t been the most, er… Thank you for mentioning…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka

All right, time to introduce the character I was talking about. Here’s a drawing of him (that I did not make):

For the things I DIDN’T make about him:

His name’s Crosshair, for his prowess with a rifle (he can hit a target from 10 kilometers/6 miles away; in other words, he could shoot something off the top of Mount…[Read more]

file:///C:/Users/JAHEL/Documents/My%20stories/What%20If–Star%20Wars-Tron%20combination%20(pdf%20file).pdf

Ok, I hope this’ll work. Here’s the whole thing!

@freedomwriter76

Poor Ezra!

@freedomwriter76

Mikkel

This is your fault. Go after him.

But I didn’t mean…

“Stay here, I’ll be back.”

His feet were already moving.

Two strides. Three. He was running.

“1st Lieutenant Ezra sir!”

The soldier stopped. Perhaps titles are useful.

Mikkel stumbled to a stop, not exactly the most graceful of its kind.

“Yes?”

“Sir, three…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Mikkel

The song had been beautiful. It had been a refuge.

“Sorry…to all of you…for being such a jerk. I just…we have no idea where we are and I’m just…being reminded of my best friend Yoshua that…that died in a plane crash I caused.”

Mikkel’s head jerked up, a thousand shattered pictures flashing by.

Os…[Read more]

@koshka He’s extremely futuristic. He comes from the Star Wars universe, so… I don’t think it’ll be too much of a problem though.

@freedomwriter76 ok then, I’ll introduce him tomorrow if I can!

@freedomwriter76

Yeah…that probably wouldn’t work. XD

Mikkel

It was a beautiful song, the type where each of the words could be felt.

Deep.

Where life still mattered.

Mikkel joined in, swinging one hand in meter.

So long. So very long ago.

He felt like a school boy.

Another voice, sweeter in tone. Mikkel looked up. The others had…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I don’t think that’s a problem, just as long as you write with them. I’m fine with someone else joining, as long as @freedomwriter76 is.

What time period is he?

@freedomwriter76

Bummer. Violin is one of Annia’s (and my) favorite instruments.

Mikkel

Mikkel smiled. A real, heartfelt smile, the first since, when?

Just as long as they didn’t wake someone up.

“I don’t know. It’s been a long time. Why don’t you start a chorus and I’ll join in once I figure the words.”

@freedomwriter76 Ok! I’ll do it whenever I have time.

@freedomwriter76

Yeah…I should definitely work on it. This is my most detailed one:

Hearts of Gold

Divided in a kingdom of shattered truth, paths are twisting into roads no one could be meant to take. How can anyone stop the consequences of choices they had no choice but to make?

Did I mention that I also struggle with making things too short?…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 I love that scene…. Marvel humor at its best. And I should probably make the story I’m telling you into a google doc or something so you can have the whole thing….

@freedomwriter76

Ooo, sounds good!

My book cover premises are so vague one can hardly tell the setting. =| I should probably work on that.

Have you ever read And God was There (by a US chaplain who I can’t remember his name)? Something about your premise just reminded me of it.

I will repeat that I did not create him, so if that’s in any way against the rules of this “game” I won’t go ahead with the plan.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka Do you mind if I add a character to your group? He’s not mine, never was, but I do some work on his character arc in the fanfic he has a major role in, and it’s a tiny bit like what your characters are going through. I’ll probably introduce him tomorrow if neither of you reply. I’m just waiting for my other group to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Mikkel

It always haunts us.

“I know.”

He pulled out his watch, but put it back without knowing the time.

Maybe talking didn’t help.

Maybe nothing helped.

But perhaps, just perhaps, there was something.

“Would you like to sing?”

@hallie-jean You can do whatever you want! I won’t mind.