TheLobsterLover

Long I pace through the mire and muck. Trying not to think on the ooze and yuck. How could my fate come to such an end. Forever to wind. Forever to. . . WIND!

(Just realizes that wind (zigzag) and wind (air flow) are spelled the same.)

He’ll find something else to do as soon as he notices they really don’t care. Or you can have them be like “yeah we don’t care about you” after ten seconds…

@godlyfantasy12 They can just ignore him…..

Let there be a light at the end of this tunnel! . . or perhaps its a cavern? Mine shaft, escape route,   subterranean passage? Well, what ever it is, IT STINKS!

Sewer?

Oh joy.

They don’t have tails right? I didn’t think they did; most fantasy humanoids don’t.

@godlyfantasy12 Okay then. @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka

Kad

Two creatures were standing there, muttering in a sort of cruel tone. Wait…were they dragons? CloneWings, even?

No, they weren’t. Their wings were feathered. And he couldn’t see their tails.

He grabbed a burnt-out torch from the wall and re-lit it with his…[Read more]

Deep into the darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing. . . Oh, hum doodle. That’s the last time I take a pretty yellow ring as present!

Where am I, The Great Spy of Gulley? Waters drip, mud goes plip, and I go. . . SLIP!?!

Great. Now I’m soaking.

@Godlyfantasy12 Ok then! I can see him mistaking them for his kind and then getting closer and being like “WHAT THE STARSHINES ARE YOU???”

Would they mistake him for one of them? Or not? His wings are more scaly, not really feathered. And he has a tail. But from a distance, his spikes MIGHT look a tiny bit like feathers…..

@godlyfantasy12 I am!

And yeah…Don’t think Kad and Paxton will make a nice combination. Although if you don’t mind, I might have Kad give Paxton’s mean brothers the fright of their lives. (They have wings too? What kind? He might think they’re dragons like him…..)

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76

Anyone want to discover some of…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

That scene. Was. So. Good. Some Peet’s of it could have been far too graphic, but not with that beautiful twist. Ugh. That’s the type of books we need more of.

( You can completely ignore this paragraph, but I’m adding it in because I wish someone pointed it out to me when I first started writing. So, just to save you a bunch of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That makes total sense, although perhaps an interesting system of genetics.

Wait…what incident?

WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!?

Of course, I understand that you didn’t necessarily do anything, but you are the author, so…

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

I’m thinking the twins have somewhat heightened senses, as I’m trying to make them more like in the books. However, they probably don’t even notice it.

The Twins

Zlatan rubbed a hand down the back of his neck till he could feel the bindings. Still in place and relatively tight. Good.

Then he…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Btw, if any of y’all have read LotR, Annia happens to have the same personality as Pippin, although thankfully not the same percentages.

Cécile

She smiled and gave a small nod. “If you would like. We don’t know our way around here, but do you need help looking for your friends?”

The group s…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

*Drops through window*

Did I hear my name?

Ooo, looks like I left some characters hanging.

*Ruefully pats Annia on the head*

@theloonyone

Well, they’re not exactly bands. Come ti think of it, I’m not sure what they’re called. They were randomly picked from a long list. =)

• Indiana Bible College is a church/Bible College choir. They have some spectacular music. I also enjoy several other Bible Colleges, but that’s the one I thought of first.
• Sight and Sound is a…

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@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Nyx looked miffed, like a kid told no.

At least everyone here seemed to have a sense of humor, even if slightly disfunctional. He grinned and seated himself cross legged and leaned against the wall, hands clasped behind his head.

Zlatan

He eased himself to the floor, grateful for…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Ok, I think I’m keeping Crosshair and Feather because now that I’ve seen Grimm, I kinda wonder how he’d get along with my characters. Rinzler will also come back, because I’m thinking of adding his sister later. But he won’t be as active. Jareth and Crow go back, because I’m planning…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Grimm!!!! *Sob*

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon

Zlatan

“We’re stopping, and you are going to rest,” Grimm stared at him. “But if you have a problem with that, you’re free to go your own way.”

Vulkasin laughed. And kept laughing till he sank helplessly to the floor. Great. Zlatan cut his eyes at his brother, but he couldn’t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

At last. Someone to make Zlati slow down for a moment.

But his brother had that quirk in his brow which said he was thinking. Analyzing.

“I’m a Desanik. I’ll be fine.” He gave the edge of his cloak a jerk. “But if you vant to stop a moment…V’e do need to know v’hat happened to…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Welcome to the Kingdom! I’m Koshka, a writer of non-magical medieval-fantasy and other stuff. Mostly poetry.

Oooo, I have no idea what all those music people/bands are, but then I have a rather… unique taste? My favorites include but is definitely not limited to, Indiana Bible College, Sight and Sound theater, and Simon…[Read more]