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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Ok that last bit was actually kinda funny.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @loopylin
Feather
More new characters!
Crosshair eyed them suspiciously, as usual. “Can you try not to stress them out by staring at them?” Feather asked. “Look, some of these kids are barely older than Jareth, and who knows what’s roving these halls.”
He muttered something…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Great job! That’s cool!
I did one of Artham a while back ago–I took a picture of his image in the book and digitally colored it. I also did a Gray Fang with the same method.
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Koshka replied to the topic Just a quick short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
That’s awesome! How are you publishing?
Yes, of course you can ask. =) I’m currently working on a trilogy, with MCs being wolves (1st book), foxes (2nd book), and small wild cats (3rd book). The world is slightly complicated, divided up between tribes, kingdoms, and even a democracy in the last book. The first two are medieval, with…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Just a quick short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
So I was randomly looking at old posts, and AHH!!! Another animal writer!
Great job showing the emotion! I must admit that as much as I like the end, I want more of these characters, a lot more. But that’s what short stories do; they give one taste of an amazing world, then leave you satisfied but hoping for more.
Anyway, good to see…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c
Feather
“So, Feather and Crosshair, huh?” Milo, one of the others in the group, turned to look at them.
Feather nodded. “Yep! If you want to know why we’re called that, our names were kinda given to us once we were already adults…it’s just the way our kind does things, I gue…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
That was short but hey…he didn’t have much to say about it…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Feather
Kaine disappears.
How….?
Crosshair, who had been staring at him the whole time, steps back, shocked. “What…..”
A bell rings in the distance as the other characters eyed the place Kaine had been.
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
(Oops, I intended to respond earlier, but…)
Ara and November are great together, from what I’ve read of the first draft scenes you posted. (November’s father makes my blood boil, but that’s beside the point)
I don’t exactly have any romance plots in my book yet, but I do know which characters get married (if that makes sense).…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6
Feather and Crosshair
“I-I’m Matthew,” stuttered one of the boys. “We were j-just exploring. T-Trying to find some food. You guys c-c-can join us if you w-want.”
“Sure.” Feather stepped closer to the group. “With a castle this big, there has to be some sort of kitchen around here somewhe…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 Great timing, I just got on myself….
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Koshka replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Do you get this thrill when you hear/see the language your learning? It makes me so excited. 😊
Oh yes! (My twin loves doing it to me, whether by pointing out something in Crylic, or nonchalantly handing me something that has it) I get so happy…I’m literally smiling just thinking about it. It’s like getting a secret message that only I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings that’s ok, often I’m busy too, and I can only be on for about an hour or so a day.
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Koshka replied to the topic I need a creature name! in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
Ah…I don’t know? For creature name I guess I usually just start with a letter, say it out loud, and see what sound comes next.
For place and group names I tend to look up words in the language of that culture and, then if there is more than one word, mash them together till I like the sound. So basically what you do.
Volkovia…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings That sounds cool, n.g.l.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone Any of you see the last rp?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings yeah he’s my favorite too!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I really love the covers of the books! But, like you, I haven’t read them in a while because of the end. Not necessarily that he dies, it’s just that it ended on such a huge cliffhanger and the author keeps refusing to say what happens next……
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Koshka replied to the topic I need a creature name! in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 9 months ago
A cross between…okay, that’s an interesting mental picture. XD
What is their habit/home? Do they have tails (you mentioned squirrels)? Are they more like people or animals? How many syllables or words do you want?
A few random ideas (and if any of these are already used it was accidental): Quirgles, Akturns, Miklins, Thindles,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I am using Save the Cat, and yes. I am a plotter. Most of my ideas come at night too! Maybe that’s just how they work. *Shrug*
I’ll probably try that and at least see where it takes me. Hopefully it’ll get me writing again, instead of ignoring the utter chaos of my characters’ lives. Thanks for the advice!
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