@thelobsterlover
Active 1 year, 5 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@sarafini Thanks! I did a writing class once too. Curiously, I didn’t like it as much I thought I might, but I rewrote a section of The Odyssey using my own characters, and it was really fun!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Of course, of course! I’m kinda at that stage with worldbuilding on a story I started like a year ago and still haven’t even started writing.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
She’s so extroverted, loud, and fun-loving while he’s serious and somber and hardly ever even smiles.
Ha, I love character couples like that.
@power I so would, but I know nothing about your charrie and you’d know nothing about mine, so we’d be guaranteed to lose…..
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 All righty, fine. She’d better learn to be a bit nicer then. I can tolerate was-super-mean-but-responded-to-forgiveness-and-are-now-better charries–I have a couple in my own stories.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper That seemed fine to me. I was a tiny bit confused at first, but I think with context the story will be far clearer. I think I remember you talking about this story.
Also, I love “Holy toothy cow!” My expression would’ve been “Holy Darkhunter!” (Context: Darkhunters are a species my brother made up that are pretty much about the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 She did? And had the nerve to tell him it was his fault?!
Can I go skewer her with the sharpest pole I have, please?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Aww Joshua!! Don’t be like that!!
(How did it get destroyed? Did she destroy it or did it get broken some other way?)
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Power replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I forgot Watership Down by Richard Adams
(Bigwig!!! 😁)
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Power replied to the topic feeling ashamed of your writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@joy-calle If you don’t mind, which of your stories are you editing, and what do you mean by ashamed? (You think the writing is just bad, you truly feel embarrassed about the story/plot, or you feel sick/depressed when you try to edit?)
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Power replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
*The Great Spy of Gully falls from the ceiling and into the limelight*
GSG: I have arrived, and am ready for my questions!
Mike: Who are you, and how did you get in here?
GSG: Countless creature have asked me those exact questions! What do I usually answer? . . . Nothing!
Mike: Um, okay? Then why did you come?
GSG: Ah, now you are…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin You’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom Fair point. Although this might have not been a current thing–perhaps it happened in the past, and the arcanin quickly settled it….and that helped the felisaro too, even if it wasn’t intended.
@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom Oh, I meant it as more of prejudice than actual truth. I mean, we’ve seen they don’t like halflings, and we’ve seen the serpenree treat the lupinari with contempt.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 LOL, Hitchens….call him that to his face and he will kill you.
Crosshair
“I’m not entirely sure how to get home…would it be fine if I travelled with all of you? I don’t want to be a bother.” Hitchens asked.
“No,” Crosshair snarled, at the same time Feather said, “Fine.”
What?
He turned to her. “Are you serio…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@sarafini I used to hate writing, but loved telling stories. When I was eight or so, my parents got me a little book of prompts and a notebook that had a section to draw pictures in. I wrote a little story about an electric eel called Tesla, and a sequel about him making friends with a talking helicopter called Blade.
Several months or maybe a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom Your point about Dune not having thumbs is interesting, considering the fact that Quelin and Rina apparently have them? @kyronthearcanin Is that a major point in the story? Like maybe the other species used to (or currently) look down on the felisaro because they’re “lesser” or “not as advanced” because they don’t have thumbs.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I’ll try to get one done today!
@mineralizedwritings LOL. His wings do look awesome.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Feather/Crosshair
“Who are you?” Elissa asked.
Hitchens bowed. “Ah, I do not believe I have had the pleasure. I am Colonel James Matthew Hitchens of the Royal British Army, madam.”
Elissa still looked timid…..probably for good reason. “Um, hi. I’m Elissa. Those two behind me are Milo and Cammie and–” She froze…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 FEATHER-HEAD HA HA HA
I have to say I love that crossover idea.
@godlyfantasy12 WHOAAA That’s actually really cool. Thier powers sound awesome! And Grimm chasing Nyx….lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Neat! (I already have plenty of pictures of charries like Hunter, Crosshair, and the rest, so I guess I just have to put them together)
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