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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Sure thing!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I’ve got villains I could use, but I don’t really want to include them…..
@esther-c @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon I MIGHT be putting in the rest of Hunter and Omega’s siblings if you all want me to….although they’ll still be the only POV characters.
@freedomwriter76 I’ll start us off then!
Hunter
Here again….
It’d…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@felicity YEAHHH SAME…..I wonder that too.
Or i’ll see an airplane in the sky and think “Oh, I SO wish that was a spaceship or something….”
I don’t even have to be the main character of the story! (probably better that I’m not.)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Jaye
“At least give me a moment to nurse my pride, will you?” came the kid’s voice.
I chuckled, remembering when I was his age…which was really only a few years ago. “Take as long as you’d like.”
Howzer sat there in front of the shelves, lashing his tail and waiting for the boy to come out.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
It’ll help when I decide who I want in. If I make them small, some of them will be less likely to want to manipulate the “smaller creatures.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Ok, so I’m not likely to be on here as much, but I have a couple characters I might add. They’ll be dragons, so should I make them their actual size (six to seven feet on average, and that’s on four talons) or should I make them human-sized?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@loopylin Not at all!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@theloonyone It’s all right!
Feather
“Well, we’d better get going. I don’t suppose anyone has an idea of what we should do now?” Elissa looked around, going to the front of the group so as to avoid Hitchens and Crosshair.
“I’m not sure.” Feather admitted. “When I was here before, we were mostly either looking for food-wh…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Maybe we can have a scene where Adolphus and Dietrich apologize to Hunter and omega for targeting them? I’ve been waiting for that ever since you said they’d had a change of heart…..
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @esther-c @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 I’d love to start up this RP again! I miss being my dragons.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper Sure thing!
Jaye
The boy turned and ran back where he’d come.
“Hey, wait!” I yelled. “We aren’t going to hurt you!”
Howzer shouldered his way through a stack of books to pursue the kid. “Hello? You can come out.” he said, even though only I could understand him. He was doing a good job keeping his voice at a friendly tone, though.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@princesachronicle22 Yeah, that’ll be funny! Go for it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c Hmmm…this might get interesting….
What defines “villain or anti-hero?” Evil character? Character who does the right things but for the wrong reasons? What about a character who is on the evil side but not evil himself/herself?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Ha ha! Yeah, Tsunami’s cool.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Yeah, Jade Mountain was cool too. I like Moon also, although my first favorite has to be Sunny.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Yeah, the series isn’t that great if you look at the later books. The first five were awesome though. My story for that is sort of Wings of Fire minus the trashy stuff, but combined with Star Wars. so basically you’ve got all the Star Wars characters but they’re dragons, and there’s several more prophecies, and some more cool things.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
The backstory was that the ice dragons were sorta enslaved and mistreated by the other kinds. Five dragonets–one of each color mentioned in the prophecy–would be the ones to save them from their fate.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin That one’s actually nice! My prophecies usually don’t rhyme, for example here’s my favorite one I’ve written:
Where the moons cast light on the tempest, there the wings of ice will rise, a talon completed.
Teal, a sixth sense to lead his brothers well.
Silver, seeing farther than any other.
Slate, smarts over senses.
Sky,…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Oh, ok cool! So maybe it starts with her eyes becoming like cat eyes or something, then she gets fire breathing, later she starts getting scales and a tail/wings? That’ll be kinda cool, tbh.
And I’ve written a couple prophecies before if you need any help!
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