TheLobsterLover

I’m kinda in between Whaley and Ellette on this. They both have good points I agree with.

It’s your call, Linus. Your story is the one on the line.

@whalekeeper I get that and to some extent agree. It’s just the inclusion of a detailed description of the spells kinda broke immersion for me a little. It didn’t seem THAT necessary.

@ellette-giselle

Oh why! Must it be a hand or foot? And why talons! Can’t you just restrict the movement! This is horrible. If he and Martha do get married, how is he supposed to hug her without slicing her back?!?!?

*feels slightly offended for the 90% of my characters that have talons*

I’M KIDDING I’M KIDDING

I mean, I have a c…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint Hmm, this was interesting.

How do Alan’s friends feel about this?

Does he realize how guilty he’ll be when he wakes up? I mean, he just dedicated his life to God and swore off magic a few chapters ago.

I’m not sure how I feel about the spells being as descriptive as they are. I had no problem with it, personally, although it…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I can tell. XD (it is getting pretty good, isn’t it?)

Leo

His smile widened into a grin.

“Any time, kid. I don’t mind.”

Rory looked back at him, a little baffled. Leo just .

“We do need to get home. Although, I think if that creep was going to find us, we’d be got by now. They’re not quite everywhere.” He grinned, then let…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ooh boyyyy…XD

Leo

Broken in a thousand ways. Leo saw the pain. He knew the pain. His heart ached.

“You weren’t born a weapon, Rory. You were made into one. Even if you were separated at birth for training and destruction, you were born a living soul. That’s what makes you sacred. Not who you are, or what you’ve done, or…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Hey! I have a question about the very end of your signature post (“This sleeping child you’re holding, is the great I AM!“-Mary did you know) Do you believe that Jesus really was the great I AM (The one true God of the Old Testament, the Father of all creation?)

It caught my attention, because that’s what I believe! (And it…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Beautiful. Just beautiful. I love it.

@ellette-giselle

Leo

Dear God. Help me. He knows so little, and I have no clue what to say. He stared at the back of the boy’s head, trying to find the right words.

“No, Rory. He rescues us from Hell. From death and torment forever. The government hasn’t and won’t be around forever. So Rory,” He settled a hand on the boy’s shoulder, brushed the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

There’s currently an agent outside the church somewhere looking for us that you could probably pound. I locked the church door, but that doesn’t mean he doesn’t have an idea of where we went.

…Or I could drop Leo’s bounty hunter somewhere for you to beat up. That could be fun.

@ellette-giselle

Leo

He paused mid step and looked back at the kid.

Quincy had looped an arm around Rory’s neck, and was reaching out dusty fingers for the glass. He giggled. “Roror, it’s God’s house.”

Roror? Leo smiled, feeling all the tension from the last few hours drain from his shoulders. And not just him; Silvia sank down on a pew…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Eh, not very far? But also not close at all. I’m just trying to save Rory’s (and now Leo’s) life. XD

Does anyone here like warrior cats??

cause I have an expansive list of virtually every warrior cat name I have ever come up with…

They’re characters derived from tons of other fandoms, but run through the naming system of the Warriors books. Star Wars, Marvel, Keeper of the Lost Cities, Tron, Jurassic World, you name it. Various random video…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I’ll second Whaley’s question. 🙂🫤

(Though you did “redacted” the post, so if you don’t care to reply I totally get it.)

@the_lost-journal don’t worry, people in this world aren’t walking around with bullet holes all over. that’d be a little too creepy for the frivolous nature of the story.

Luckily for you, I was just thinking about changing it out for something less threatening, but I haven’t ironed out what yet.

I have no idea how many snowballs I was hit with so…….

I’ll come back with 200 or more words. LOL.

@elishavet-pidyon

That’s a very pretty board! I like the dove in the corner.

(boy don’t I have a thing for shepherds. XD)

No shame in that. All my main characters are some form of soldier or warrior. XD at least yours have a more or less peacetime job.

@elishavet-pidyon

Lovely. *Nods vigorously*

@elishavet-pidyon

It’s beautiful! I love the almost Ireland fairytale, almost medieval Europe feel. Lovely.

(Also, I hit you with some snowballs, so you could share some more scenes from Golden Song. In case you were wondering. XP)