Miriam K.

@ellette-giselle

Ohhhh okay makes sense!

@highscribeofaetherium

That’s fair lol

@ellette-giselle

thanks!!! I’ve been having a lot of deep thoughts lately XD lol

I don’t think this was on your radar when Cass was first introduced, and in several of the early chapters. (am i right?) so, you need to show a little bit of that in him. just a teeny bit. Maybe he can’t stand it if one of hios brothers is better at him in som…

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@whalekeeper

Sooo

I think I have an idea for Lilitu’s internal conflict!

I’ve been plotting a lot today, if you couldn’t tell 😂

Sef is self depricating, like you said. She’s more like “I’m stupid. I’m worthless. I’m not worthy of love.”

What I did is prayed before developing characters today and asked God to show me verses to base the…[Read more]

I’m just waiting for you to go to my WIP page and freak out XD XD

@ellette-giselle

I don’t see either, to be honest XD

I see myself in her. I love her personality and…idk, I just want to give her a hug, the poor girl 😭💔💗💗

@ellette-giselle

I love these scenes! You’re very talented, and I can see you have a passion for sharing Jesus through your writing! Keep it up!

Sabina is my favorite! 💗 (I also love her name)

@everyone

Okay.

For those of you sad and mad about Cass….

I have some spoilers.

So if you hate spoilers, LOOK AWAY

I’ve been brainstorming a lot about Cass’s character, and I have come to a decision.

Cass is a perfect example of how even strong Christians give up, how someone who appears to be a superchristian can fall and crumble under…[Read more]

@theducktator

I feel like I should have some long drawn out post since one of my first for real novels was dystopian, but it seriously needs a lot of work, so I only have one short piece of advice for you. 😉

Don’t limit your scope. A lot of times dystopia takes place in a world/country similar to America, right? Don’t tie yourself down to tha…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle
Yep! Sorry, my post was a little late, lol

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, he looks so cool!!

@whalekeeper

No that’s not overwhelming me!!! <3

Actually that makes a lot of sense.

I have to think about that XD XD (and pray about it too!) because that would work really well!!!

Aww thanks for asking!

If you look at the Prayer Requests topic I posted about how I’m doing (sorry I’m tired and don’t feel like retyping all that lol)

But…[Read more]

@theducktator

Oh my goodness your signature lol that’s great

YES THEY ARE

Eloy’s elite

hahaha yeah

@theducktator

This one’s for you.

@anyone-else I know this scene isn’t my best, but I’m super tired and brain-dead…and I just felt like writing something XD

Chapter 15

Sef held Hanna tight to her chest.

Please be quiet, she silently pleaded, rocking back and forth.

A waft of the rancid odor escaped through the secret door overhead, and Sef…[Read more]

@theshadow

<333

I’m glad you liked it!

@theshadow

Thanks for reading it!!!!!!! <3

Idk if I’d call it a resistance, but all I can say is that light always prevails over darkness!!!!!!!!!

@highscribeofatherium

hahaha you’re good!!!

@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c

Thanks guys <333

@highscribeofaetherium

He didn’t get it sloshed over him–it was much worse and more painful, I’m afraid.

he  tried to eat it when it was wayyyyyyyyyy too hot XD XD

should I make this clearer?

@theducktator

At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD