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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Honestly…
I have an idea….
ignore that first chapter lol
I HAVE A PLAN *maniacal laughter*
WHY DO I CHANGE IT SO MUCHHHH lol
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Love it! 🥰
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I’m not 100% sure either 🤣
Ok that makes sense! 😉 Yeah, I could always take a snippet of it and write it how I would interpret a four year old thinking through that if you wanted an example. (i don’t know if that’s weird or not 😂)
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@peoplessss
Sharing the three moodboards from my current WIP! (First is the book moodboard, then Clayton, then Audrey)
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I don’t know how a four year old thinks hahaha
honestly I had really deep thoughts for a little kid and I have always thought really complex, so it seems realistic to me XDXD
I will work on it!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Ok….Werner looks like he’d be a favorite character of mine… 🤭 Lmk if you post any snippets of him!!
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Oooh, I like it!! My only critique is the first half of the chapter…. It was great until I found out Sef was only 4 at this point. It just felt a little too complex to be coming from a 4 year old, ya know? Maybe simplify it somehow? Keep the same emotions that Sef is feeling, but see if you can bring it down to a 4 year o…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 2 weeks, 3 days ago
🫡
😁
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Ooohhhh, interesting….👀
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 2 weeks, 3 days ago
This looks interesting! I can’t promise I’ll be able to keep up, but I might just stalk the topic. We’ll see!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@anyone-who-is-interested
Chapter 1
Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.
But Sef wouldn’t let go.
Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.
In a way, he was.
And now he was leaving.
“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…
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Esther replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I agree with what hybrid and highscribe said. Definitely consider the length and genre of your book first. If your novel is only going to be 60-70k, I would definitely hesitate adding more POV characters cuz then they each only get 10-15k each and that’s really not a lot in the big scheme of things.
Also consider if each c…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Oh no, my prayers will definitely be with you and your family. 🙏🏻 Sending virtual hugs your way! 🫂💕
“fear not, for I am with you; be not dismayed, for I am your God; I will strengthen you, I will help you, I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.”
Isaiah 41:10 “I sought the Lord, and he answered me and delivered me from…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Caught up on my snowballs!
Nowwww….
@lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @godlyfantasy12 SNOWBALLLSSSSS!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Thanks!! <3 :))
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Esther replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Oh dear, I love studying history, but I normally don’t go out of my way to find big books about it 😂 But I’ll do some looking and see if I can find anything that you might find helpful. :))
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Guys I’ll catch up on my snowballs later today I promiseeee
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