Miriam K.

@savnnah_grace2009

Funnnn 😁I know some of my characters are going to be so confused. XD

Haha, just kidding, I guess I don’t have to go yet. 😂

@rae

Lukas

“Uh, My-my mother wanted me here. Y-you?”

Lukas felt a small spark of empathy for Chase. He must be nervous. At least that why Lukas always stuttered. Lukas gave him a confident smile. “Cool! I guess it’s the same for me. Except… my father really wanted me here.” And Lukas wan…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks for your help!

@esther-c

Umm… there might be a stable, but idk. You can just create one if you want, or she can literally bring the horse into the school to create some chaos if you want. XD

Oooh…chaos? YES please!

And for reference, here’s what Xandro looks like

He also can manipulate water and is very intelligent and understands human speech, but c…[Read more]

@everyone should the king intervene? Cuz Marcurious could burn the place down if he wanted too, and we don’t really want our characters killed. (Assuming anything Marcurious could do would kill his opponents, they seem pretty tough, lol)

Marcurious

Hmmm…..what form would work best to kill them, he mused as he dodged another flying blade. And then he glanced above the throne and saw the carved dragon. Perfect. Dragons had scales like armor, they could fly, they could breathe fire….

And so he closed his eyes for a brief moment and shapeshifted into one. He let out a roar and…[Read more]

@rae

The only villains I’ve ever actually liked are Hans *tear rolls down my cheek* and Grathmere. Everyone else are plot tools and can die for all I care.

Yeah….Hans *cries*

I have to go now, but I’ll be able to RP some more this afternoon. (Hopefully XD)

@smiley

(wow Ev you’re so forward about it, I think it took Skylar&Loki and Bucky&Riya like three RPs just to ask)

Oh yes. XD He…. Doesn’t really beat around the bush. 😂

Ev

Falon closed her locker and asked, “What color scheme should we do?”

“Well, I like the color red. So we could totally do a bright red… or a darker red. I don’t know, I…[Read more]

@beth-torres

I’m super late to the party, but welcome to Kingdom Pen, Elizabeth!!

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!

I have no idea what everyone else has already asked you, so I only have two questions for ya. 😊

1. If you could visit any country in the wor…[Read more]

@jonas

Ikr, lol. Kian’s the strong and silent type… just a villain and that makes it a little creepier sometimes. XD

@savannah_grace2009

Ok. That makes sense.

Yeah, I’ll try to think on it and see what you’re seeing. 🙂

Marcurious

“Ever heard of manners?” Marcurious asked as he morphed back into human form just as the man tried to stab him. The change threw him off, and the blade went between Marcurious’s ankles. “

@savannah_grace2009

Umm… there might be a stable, but idk. You can just create one if you want, or she can literally bring the horse into the school to create some chaos if you want. XD

@grcr

Yeah….I mean, why would our characters ever get along, XD

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @rae @savannah_grace2009

Kian

Kian cocked as his head as he sauntered into what looked like a throne room. But it was no throne room like the one in the shah’s palace in Rashkitan. Everything here seemed more grand and glorious, unlike the shah’s simple grandeur of his throne room.

Two people fighting each oth…[Read more]

@esther @everyone

Okay, horse it is XD is there already a stable where she can keep him, or do we have to make it up on the spot?

Sure, she can share a dorm with Callista, I’ll just bring her to the school, then.

@esther-c

Well, it’s not necessarily a flashback. It’s a chapter that shows Sef’s life before the Pythonos capture Neveah and Hanna, and it is supposed to foreshadow a bit what’s going to happen in the future. Something seems kind of wrong with it though, and I’m not sure what XD

Yeah, I’ll definitely keep it somewhere, but for some reason I…[Read more]

@smiley

(we have to get better at conversation XD but my mind’s been blank all week fro writing)

I know, me too. 😂

Ev 

“Not much, what about you?”

“Same.” Ev chuckled and ran a hand through his hair. “We should probably go shopping for our outfits for the dance soon. I hear there’s a mall nearby.”

@savannah_grace2009

I think it’s fine. I don’t think there’s anything wrong with it except a few technical things which don’t really matter right now. I’m assuming this is a flashback, right?

You said it feels out of place in your book, so check to make sure that this flashback is establishing or foreshadowing something. Like, establish…[Read more]