Miriam K.

@freedomwriter76

Ev

Ev shrugged. “Well, he has a gun, so that might keep us from attacking each other.”

“From killing each other,” Adrian corrected, holding up a finger. “I don’t think anyone would mind if I attacked you.” He flashed him a grin.

“I would,” Ev mumbled with a quick raise of his eyebrows. He turned to the young man and woman…[Read more]

@calyhuge

I love itttt 😏😂

@rae

Yesss, let’s do it! *evil author laugh* That would be so funny. Especially if they learn some sort of ballroom dancing where you change partners throughout. 🤣

@lydibug

Sorry, I’m going to have to not join after all. I need to focus more on my writing, and I’m already in quite a few RP’s. Though this is a really cool idea!!

@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Sorry guys, but I’m going to have to leave this RP to focus more on my writing. Just thought I’d let you know!

@hybridlore

Okay, so this is sort of like a spiritual battle? Sef can defeat the Pythonos because she is willing to stand up to their lies. Lilitu is a Payne too, though, right? The reason Sef is the only one who can defeat them is because she has believed their lies and he hasn’t?

Essentially, yes, and…no. It’s hard to explain the thoughts i…[Read more]

@vinagirl

Welcome, welcome!

(Now for my proper introduction XD)

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, fiction-writing, homeschooled, God-loving, teen girl!!

I write fantasy and dystopian, and I’ve dabbled a bit in historical and contemporary fiction.

My name is Raegan. I am the oldest of seven children and a lot of…

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@jonas

I think Freedom’s adding a few more charries to the castle.

@hybridlore

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s a second book I don’t think it’s a big problem.

I agree, the ending is abrupt, but I’m not sure how to make it any less so. It just kinda m…[Read more]

Those two… 🤣

@freedomwriter76

Alrighty! Here it is! (:

Everton

Ev woke with a start. His vision blurred and unblurred until he could finally see clearly. His eyes glanced over the stone walls and the flickering sconces.

Oh… this place again… He had been here before. Wasn’t sure how it had happened, but here he was in this wild castle again.

He mutte…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Sure! Sounds good! I’ll get to writing their first RP later this afternoon, but feel free to do one before me. (:

@freedomwriter76

Aww 😢 Poor boi. He needs hugs. 🥺

@loopylin

Oh my word, I love that. 🤣

@jonas @rae @freedomwriter76

Sef

“I-I guess we could stay together,” Sef said softly. She didn’t want the others upset at her for wanting to split up, and if they thought that was better…she would do what they wanted. She was used to not having her own way. She didn’t deserve it.

She just wanted to go home. Back home where nobody cared one…[Read more]

@esther-c

Okay! That’s fine! I totally understand not having brainpower lol!

@savannah_grace2009

I love how neat this outline looks. Lol. Cuz my method of plotting differs with every book and story I write. XD

I’d love to critique it, but I don’t have the brain power to do that right now. And since I offered to give you feedback on your WIP, I might just wait to read it instead of just the outline.

@beth-torres

Oh, ok, gotcha.

Lol, that’d be funny. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

Callista 

“Um, I believe I saw a sign when we were walking through here earlier. If I remember right, they’re being taught by the dance instructor from the school. Actually you know what…” she pulled out her phone. “I’ll be right back.”

After a minute or so, she returned. “Alright. I found the instructor’s website and I’m fi…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I knowwwww

I just recently wrote the scene where Amir dies and afterwards I was like, “Esther, why did you do this?!?!” (But I also wrote a short epilogue that I absolutely love because for the most part the subplots have been resolved, but the epilogue leaves a wide opening for a sequel…. 😏)