@theducktator
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Finally decided to join.
I’m gonna add Tenz and Reid since they’re highschool age. I did have them in another rp, but I kinda wanna see what happens here. Plus Tenz has healing abilities, and that may be needed the way this rp is going.
Tenz and ReidÂ
Identical twins.
They both have unruly black hair (Tenz’s more so, Reid at least tries to…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel kept walking in silence. Without any information, he could do no more but worry about their predicament. After a time, the hallway opened into another room. Gabriel froze, pulling Lucy back. Lit candles flickered on a table inside the room. Gabriel pressed himself against the wall of the hallway b…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 4 weeks ago
I tried out a new style on Baron, both in hair and drawing.
I like both.
I decided to change his hair for at least while he stays with Jenna because it doesn’t make sense why he’d still not at least try to comb his hair.
What do you think?

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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
“Hm.” Lucy was still thinking about Gabriel’s previous words. Maybe their homes were near each other; after all, Lucy couldn’t leave her city either. “I… No. Didn’t see anything.
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel smiled. “I didn’t know there was a feminine version. Your home sounds so different than mine. I wonder if the entire world is so different. I’ve always wondered what’s beyond the sea that isolates my home, but we aren’t allowed to leave.”
His foot stepped on a rotten floorboard, causing him to s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
“That’s nicer than being called Fifth at your christening.” Lucy glanced at him. “That’s my ma’s name too. Gabriella, I mean. It’s the prettiest name I know.”
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel paused. “I suppose. When I don’t wear my mask, I’m merely a strange peasant. When wearing the mask, people think I’m a hero. They say I’m probably some rich knight who decided to dedicate themselves to protecting the people from afar. They never suspect that the real man behind the mask s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
After he was sure the floor was steady, the Protector gave Lucy one of his blades again. Lucy held it with the tip pointing down, but it glowed enough to illuminate their path. The walls swelled from years of shifting earth; dark solidified soil cracked through the plaster. Where the wall was unbroken, someone had decorated it with…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel sheathed his blades. Now only the rune on his mask glowed, but he knew if the room tilted and they fell, his unsheathed blades could kill one of them. He grabbed Lucy’s hand, nervous about being separated again.
“Before this room shifts anymore, let’s get out of here.” He looked around the r…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
There was another door ahead; gray, with wooden panels, it was the kind of door that hid along an equally gray wall in a sagging house.
“I want to know why it’s here.” Lucy got up and, after some thought, played a descending scale.
The floor creaked. As Lucy played, the room shifted like a ship at sea, and when she looked at the…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel flinched at the loud boom of the piano cover. He cast Lucy a glance, making sure she was okay, before peering inside the piano. “It does have strings.” He hit one of the keys, watching the hammer strike the corresponding string inside the piano, silently fascinated.
Eventually, he dropped his h…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
‘Racist Hospital Workers Let Kid Die.’
😂 I’m dying
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
@loopylin
Yep, those are the rules I remember -
whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy had to choke down a snort. She took the piano lid and pulled. It was heavy but had no hinges. It fell off with a thunderous boom. She scampered back, lost her balance, and sat down suddenly. Dust rose and she let out two sharp sneezes.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 4 weeks ago
@rae thank you! My dad said the same so it looks like this is a keeper!
My prose is weird lol. I kept it in my style (sorta like my fanfic) but I also wanted to inject a bit of the style from books I like.
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RAE replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 4 weeks ago
I read it, and I have to say, it immediately captivated me.
Not only does the Prologue promise us a swash-buckling tale of heroics and battles, but I find the prose rather enjoyable. It definitely has that storyteller feel like Uncle Garth in Secondhand Lions (if anyone gets that movie reference). Maybe not exact, but it reminded me of…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
When Lucy tried to play the piano, Gabriel relaxed, realizing it was merely an instrument. He pressed a few keys exploratorily, sneezing as the dust traveled under his mask and into his nose. “Is it a magic instrument? Most the ones in my world are ones you have to blow wind through to work, or have s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
BAhaha XD
I think it’s safe to say this is a weird place and there can be weird random objects scattered within. Maybe that says something about the labyrinth masters, not so much the piano itself.
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
@whalekeeper
I love how Lucy is wondering why there’s a piano in the room, while I’m over here like “It couldn’t be empty, and just a couch or chair is boring, so piano was the first thing I thought of”. Zero deep meaning just a brain who was trying to rp while listening to a streamer talk about a mech video game. - Load More
