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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 14 hours ago
Sorry I’m late. I spent a long time yesterday finishing up a final assignment. But I’m done school for at least a year now!
It was a bittersweet parting the next day, and Leon and Julian found it more difficult to leave Landstraten now than when they had left on their way to the capital.
Who all is with them right now? You have…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 days, 15 hours ago
Looks like we need more questions for everybody. I’ll think up a few. 😄
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 days, 15 hours ago
Vyette: What kinds of hairstyles do you usually wear? What is your best subject in school, and does school really matter because of your birth privilege? Who are you closest to? Do you and your father disagree about more than just marriage?
*squints at Barnes* I seem to remember her getting drunk in front of her crush…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 days, 17 hours ago
“Uh! Yeah! I believe it is German! The main people we have living here are Germans, French, Brazilian, and Portuguese. They uh… we all speak Latin…”
Huntress: What are the others’ languages like?
“N-no… Earth… as in the planet. How have y0u never heard of earth? Aren’t you Australian…?
Sniper: When did I say I wasn’t [Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 days, 18 hours ago
And share some of it… I love your style.
Yayy, maybe I’ll do that. If there’s something to show. I’ve been drawing a lot of one character, but I’m drawing her without her mask and I’d like to keep the mystery going until I feel confident with the design. It’s difficult to stick with one drawn version of a character.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 18 hours ago
@loopylin @koshka @theducktator @raxforge @whoever
Barnes
A couple times, students wandered to the edge of the field. Barnes fixed them with a deliberate stare, tapping her wrist to indicate they wouldn’t be restricted forever.
Another kid ran up from the school entrance. This kid was paler than the others, with tufts of light hair glaring in…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 14 hours ago
@ellette-giselle thanks, got it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 14 hours ago
@ellette-giselle sure, thanks!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 3 days, 14 hours ago
They’re gonna be horribly confused when they realize that the galaxy Scout, Huntress and Sniper come from is basically just a version of Earth where every country is a planet. Hopefully they won’t start talking history, or things wil get really weird. LOL.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 3 days, 14 hours ago
And your features remind me of the Eidechse!
[I’m assuming he’s talking to Sniper here, in terms of the lizard thing. Unless he’s just referring to Scout’s forked tongue.]
Huntress: Eidechse….That sounds like a Drachen word, kinda. It’s got the same harshness to it. I wonder if Medic’s ever heard it.
Ailurid….What does it…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 15 hours ago
@hybridlore where are they? I don’t see them on the part 1 document, is there the part 2 doc anywhere?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 3 days, 15 hours ago
@the_lost-journal okay!!
*Scout sees Leander being interviewed*
Scout’s thoughts: Hey, an Ailurid! Although his eyes look more like a Changeling’s. Maybe he’s a hybrid.
*He nudges Huntress to get her to look. She notices Leander and comes over to him*
Huntress: You remind me of my best friend. He’s got catlike ears and a tail just like yours.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 15 hours ago
@the_lost-journal lol yesss
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 16 hours ago
Good section! I like it.
It was a little unclear that the other three men were joining Leon and Julian until now, unless they were in the first scene and I’m completely blaming. I just don’t think we got to hear that they were back yet.
My guess is that since no one has seen the prince’s face, they will replace him with his c…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 3 days, 18 hours ago
@the_lost-journal I think Leander’s my favorite character of yours so far!
Mind if my characters ask him a few questions? They’ll probably be surprised at how similar the creatures of their worlds are.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 4 days, 5 hours ago
Nope, just gotta ask someone else some questions.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 7 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint
Next two chapters!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 14 hours ago
@the_lost-journal lol that last one
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 14 hours ago
@ellette-giselle awesome first section!!
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