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@ellette-giselle

Yep! I noticed that! 😆 “Teacher.” I like it.

@ellette-giselle

I love the way you put us inside Rolf’s story instead of having him just tell it. It worked so much better. Also, the transitions were great.

Good section. The part about Conrad was sad, though. I don’t really have any big critiques. Great job!

@the_lost-journal aww cute!

It’s spelling “quacking” not “quaking” but that’s all right.

@esther-c @loopylin I’ve avoided Discord for as long as possible (I don’t even remember the reason why) but everyone keeps bringing up reasons that I should have it lol. Never heard of Slack.

@theshadow lolllllll

that’s gonna be weird

@theshadow

It looks good! I don’t have any major critiques. It is a very short chapter, but it does a good job of building on the tension. Also, I like the way you described the trees.

It seems a little weird that Olivia and Adeline and Dylan don’t seem to care about their families… well, maybe Dylan a little bit.

@freed_and_redeemed

Love it!!

Also was not expecting Erich! I need to know how he joined the American army!!!

Or if we can’t do Slack find another free platform where we can have separate channels/forums to keep everything organized

I’m half-tempted just to create our own Slack community at this point. Since (i think) we all trust each other. And then only people we know can get in (no more stalkers XP).

Because if KP was just abandoned, then we’ve got our own little writing community that will live on

Idk 🤷🏻‍♀️ Just an idea…

@koshka true, true.

btw what exactly is a gork?

@grcr

About his eyes on fire, is it more of just his irises or is it the whole thing?

Whole eye on fire pls

And what colors do you want his clothes to be?

I don’t really know to be honest. Whatever normal raggy clothes have in color. (sry that’s not really helpful)

@dekreel

Aw, thank you!! That made my day!! 🥹☺️💛

@theducktator oh yeah

I don’t remember the aftermath that well. I remember the storm (thankfully our house wasn’t damaged) but not about what went on afterward.

@theducktator yeah I’m in Florida. The one that hit last year in October?

@theducktator oh.

That is concerning.

I didn’t know that.

Which hurricane was it?

also your poem is hilarious

@rae ahahahaha

I’m sorry that happened to you.

@ellette-giselle aww man that’s horrible!

@ellette-giselle

Ohhhhh nooooooo! Ellette! I’m so sorry! That’s terrible!

I’m glad LOS was okay… but I’m really sorry about your WIP. That’s terrible.

I use Word Online (microsoft365.com, I think…) to write, and it saves online so I can access it through my phone and other devices. That might be worth looking into for the future, since I’m pre…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle My brother, whose hair goes down to his neck, tucks his hair behind his ears all the time. We actually had to tell him to do it less cause my mom doesn’t want him to push on the back of his ears every time he does it.

Soon, Great Pastabilities will be opening for business! It is a vegan, gluten free, cruelty free Pasta brand which will produce macaroni and cheese without products which could potentially harm anyone or anything!

The Grand Opening will be at 9:00 am March 18th 2025 in the Mall on Main Street, where we’ve found a location where Cinnabon used to…[Read more]