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@rae

I’m interested! I might not be able to do every one but I think it’s a great idea!

@mineralizedwritings

np!

Will do

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @grcr @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @anyone-else

So I just got an idea. Recently I’ve been enjoying doing some art challenges to help me grow in some weak points in my art, and was wondering if we could do an art challenge together each week or two. Anyone interesting?

If people are, I’ll create a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was slightly sad that I didn’t make much effect (though what was I expecting when the writing for this final story was sub-par). i was hoping that the story would hit even if the writing didn’t, but I’m quite content after reading your last comment.

I will rewrite this story later, and then I hope it hits harder.

For now, I’m…[Read more]

@koshka lolll

my brother and I share memes with each other all the time too

@koshka lol where’d you see it?

You could also do something from the perspective of lyen and gorb soldiers during the wars, maybe two members of the Faithful who don’t want to kill each other since they follow the same Savior. (idk if there are gorb Faithful but I would be surprised if there weren’t at least one or two)

Or have one of the other species hear of the lyens’…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal lol

@linus-smallrpint Is there a reason for that?

Cause I remember Oliver saying the gorb species was “savage” compared to the lyens, who from your reading seem to be pretty civilized. But I’m also not inclined to trust the lyens’ rating of an enemy’s civility, so.

But that makes me think. Maybe there should be other books set in this…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

“If you look at the code before, you will see the two dashes and the arrow indicating the end of a comment. . .”

I’m looking for this, but I can’t find it in the HTML box before the comment you left. I did, however, see this: class=”mt-2″ placeholder=””> –> directly below the comment. Is that what you were referring to?

So if…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thank you!

by the way, will we ever see more gorbs? I kinda miss your humorous Australian lizard people.

Not likely. Don’t forget that gorbs are enemies of the lyens, so to find one in a lyen country, like Oliver, is rare.

@ellette-giselle

Don’t have too much to say for this section. It was fine.

Just one thing:

Well, Hans is nineteen.

It feels like 90% of your characters are males between 16 and 30. Yes, there have been exceptions, but everywhere they go, they run into eager young men. It might be nicer to see some more variety in characters, even if older men…[Read more]

Oh, it actually imbedded the thing in the page. Interesting. Click on the 0.5 so that the warning on the top doesn’t bloke the code, or click on the box symbol in the top right to take you to the page itself.

@hybridlore

This isn’t perfect, but here is something that may be similar to Cole’s test. I made it with some basic HTML code, Javascript for functionality, and Bootstrap for styling. I can’t do everything in here, for example, this form isn’t actually sending the information you enter in it anywhere and…[Read more]

I’ve been finished all the work in class for an hour

Doing something useful is beyond my power.

A mere mortal trying not to die from boredom

I suppose I’ll just post something on the KP forum.

@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!

by the way, will we ever see more gorbs? I kinda miss your humorous Australian lizard people. (you somehow struck everything I like with that one lol)

@linus-smallprint I love that drawing of Tyn! She’s a good balance of humanoid and animal. I like it when authors do that.

@whalekeeeper

Hmm. I actually started learning basic historical swordfighting (mostly rapier) in order to write about it with greater accuracy. I took a free online course which told me the basics (parts of the sword, how to hold it, lunges, basic foot movements). I have this wooden dowel that I was using. I should get back into it–I have daily…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thank you for your feedback. The first thing you mentioned about Tyn not wanting to see Alan fail is a good point. In Book I, she did look up to him and seeing him resist magic for so long was hope she could overcome her instincts. But when he failed and returned to magic, she began to lose hope, which is why she refused to help…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Yay! I was enjoying TPE. (says the person who hasn’t really commented on that thread. Sorry.)

Oh really? 😅😃 Interesting. (No problem though)

The song list is very comprehensive. I am in mild awe. I’ll have to listen in on it a bit.

Heehee.