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@ellette-giselle

 I think you have a great chance of doing that just as much as anyone else.

why thank you!

@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint If all else fails, remember that your guys’ stories, no matter what they are, will make so much more impact in the world than mine.

@ellette-giselle

Here, some Bible verses for you right now:

10 As each has received a gift, use it to serve one another, as good stewards of God’s varied grace: 11 whoever speaks, as one who speaks oracles of God; whoever serves, as one who serves by the strength that God supplies—in order that in everything God may be glorified through Jesus Chr…

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@ellette-giselle

Sorry to make you depressed. I know I do have a tendency to see the negative over the positive. (Just ask my sister, Ellie, about the feedback I give her on her books!) Others like Liberty and Hybridlore seem to be enjoying it, though, so don’t you take my feedback as a sign that this shouldn’t be written. I know Leon is one of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I can understand the raining part lol. Me, I actually like it when it’s raining, but the humidity that comes afterward plus the frequent 80-90 degree weather is not fun at all.

@ellette-giselle not gonna lie, I’ve never seen you as….as…. *gestures to your depressed posts* this. Critics are likely gonna say way worse about your book, and won’t be as nice as Linus or any of the rest of us about it. It’s just the life of an author.

Also, remember, you can say no to feedback. If you don’t agree with something he said,…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon I love how the writer is confused when things don’t go exactly the way she tried to write it lol

@ellette-giselle

 I wonder……. these books were written so long ago and comparing them to the stuff I have written now, they’re just not as good at all.

I feel you. I look back at some of my old work and I’m like “I wrote this??? Sheesh, this is terrible!”

But then sometimes I look back at my old work and I’m like “With a little reworking, this c…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yikes! Bad Smaug!

btw, do you still need me to wait until April now that you sent this?

I suppose you could start earlier.

@ellette-giselle

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That’s a messy looking link, that is. You should click on it. It might contains some Book feedback!!

Hopefully, Microsoft Word is still acceptable.

I didn’t get around to rereading the book this time. But this is what my thoughts…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Yeah, Hugo ran back to our group

@everyone

I want to update Marcel/Mateo/Celarent in a bit, but I am at a Southeast-wide presbytery meeting, and right now, my only purpose in life is to refill food and water pitchers for everybody. It’s worth it. XD But due to my responsibilities, please wait for me to proceed.

@whalekeeper

Yeah. Plus, Martha would be more comfortable if she wasn’t alone with a bunch of guys. It would be better if Eric was awake, but since he’s not, she’s glad Sara is there.

If I can, I will post my drawings today. I just have the 1 hour one left to do

@linus-smallprint

I’m assuming you added Sara because writing one female in the group is awkward?

@linus-smallprint thank you! I don’t draw mecha dragons much, but when I do I like to put detail into them.

@keilah-h

That’s a fine mecha dragon!

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 12 out now!

I was talking to my sister last night about the story, and we decided on a couple of things that would make us both more comfortable reading and writing in the story, which would also make things less awkward for the characters. However, I still will not rewrite…[Read more]

-be me

-be listening to the Portal 2 soundtrack cause I get into a phase of wanting to do that every so often (still haven’t played the game itself though, despite the fact that like 3 people have recommended it to me, cause I’m not sure if my computer will like me if I download another game)

-have a drawing idea

-D R A G O N  W H E A T L E…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 whoa, the fact that Lilitu just killed the man responsible for his current situation is crazy!! Even if he doesn’t know that.

It’s also a good message–revenge isn’t the best option. Killing Kratos just made Lilitu feel worse.