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@the_lost-journal

Oof, Wyoh was probably hacking you computer or smth XD

Yeah, probably lolol XD XD

Well, it’s okay… I guess… I think everyone could be a little bit of a bully from time to time.

*nods*

Yeah, I was looking over what I said, and what I meant to say what if it was someone close to you who was the killer?

“Ohhh, I see ya now. Hmm… I’…[Read more]

Interesting how he seems to have a connection to the other characters. I do agree his name blends in with the others’ but that’s not a bad thing, nor do you need to change it, that’s just me failing to pay attention lol

@ellette-giselle okay! That makes enough sense for me.

Andreas as a name or Andreas as a character?

@ellette-giselle

It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.

I’m late but tell her happy birthday!

@linus-smallprint yeah, it’s just a first draft, those are never, ever perfect. Some can get close to how the end story is, but there’s inevitably gonna have to be at least one scene you cut, one set of dialogue you rework, one characters whose role changes, etc.

also I had video game soundtracks on in the background while I was doing schoolwork and this one decided to come on right as I started reading and hit the part when they discover the ruined university…..

…one of like three or four orchestral songs in that entire playlist, and oddly fitting too. Funny how that always happens. No matter what…[Read more]

Finished it! That was a rollercoaster, between confronting a false teacher and the destruction of the university. The plot thickens.

Basically my question is more of “Is this supposed to be a hypothetical eighth continent or small island somewhere in the world, or does this Earth have completely different continents, and the biblical places exist in different configurations?”

Sorry for such a weird question, and sorry if I’ve asked something similar before, but I just…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I see. But is there a Europe somewhere else (nearby?), or does the island-continent in your map completely replace it?

As in, was the “Rome” referred to in the book of Romans what eventually became the Empire, or is it a different place in a different part of the world, and the two have similar cultures either just because…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Well, you don’t have to change it, but it’s up to you.

Other ideas if you want them: Nickolas, Charles, Clive.

(I grabbed these names from a very specific source that I cannot name.)

@ellette-giselle

Ugh. But I like his name. *pouts*

Then stash it in for a different character. It’s not a bad name.

@ellette-giselle

Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.

Okay!

Ah yes, well, we were in Leon’s POV at the time.

I should make myself pay more attention to whose POV you are using, because I haven’t really other than when they are separated.

btw, any thoughts on Andreas?

I’m trying to recall people from the last book. Per…[Read more]

Oh My GoOdNeSs… my computer almost erased my message…….!!

@the_lost-journal

Thanks, your family sounds pretty cool too! And I didn’t mean to insult you are anything…

“Awh, yeah, nah. It’s good—not offended at all.”

Wow, so you’ve bullied someone before…? That’s a little surprising.

*laughs a little in a half embarrassed half remorseful w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

They reached the green and came to a stop. The castle-like University–– haven to so much work in the spread of Christianity–– was nearly destroyed. It had been hit many times by siege weapons, and the towers and walls were caved-in and crumbling.

Wow. They really hated that university. Yikes. No survivors again?

“He’s one of the…

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@dekreel

Julia: “Ice cream!!! There’s a burger place down the highway that offers free soft serve with their meals and it is honestly the BESTEST idea ever!”

LOLOL I find this very funny becasue my name is Julia, and I really love ice cream… hee hee.

Question: Julia, what is your favorite ice cream flavor?

@ellette-giselle

I didn’t get tagged for the last section, so I read them both today. I like it a lot. Linus (?) was right, it was time to go back into the cities. Sad for all those at the University. I like how you showed a threat to the church besides the Soldiers—a threat from the inside. And I’m guessing Andreas is also a former fighter that…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal awwww that’s too bad!

hopefully today will be a good day though!